Instinctive Disobedience

By 花灯里

3.9

CompletedchineseWeb Novel

Genres

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fantasy romance school life shounen ai slice of life

Chapters

57 chapters

Started

2021

Description

Yan Qi and Ye Yang were the two de facto ‘idols’ of the First City High, one calm and collected, one wild and rebellious. They grew up together, always enrolled in the same school, the same class, and the same dormitory. They even presented as top Alphas at the same time. During one stormy night, Ye Yang fell into his rut and almost punched a hole into the dormitory wall. Yan Qi was kept awake by the noise. He walked over to Ye Yang’s bed and pulled down the collar of his shirt, casually pointing to his slender neck: “If you really can’t take it, just bite me.” Later at the celebration dance, Ye Yang fell into his fevered rut craze once again and kissed Yan Qi in the dormitory. Yan Qi pushed him to the ground and was so mad that he laughed: “Great, Ye Yang, you’re just so great.” To be coming onto your own best friend. Later that night, Yan Qi suddenly realised something. The person that Ye Yang had always had a crush on seemed to be him. I will turn against my nature, betray my instincts, and love you forever. — “The Selfish Gene”

Publication Information

Original Publisher: jjwxc
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

Instinctive Disobedience Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator

My Thoughts on Instinctive Disobedience

"Instinctive Disobedience" is a completed omegaverse novel that I recently dove into, and it certainly left an impression. Blending fantasy, romance, school life, and shounen ai, it's a story that tries to hit a lot of sweet spots, and for the most part, I think it succeeds.

First Impressions

The premise definitely grabbed my attention. The combination of childhood friends, a cold protagonist, and complex family relationships within an omegaverse setting felt like a recipe for compelling drama and heartwarming moments. I was definitely intrigued by the "love interest falls in love first" tag, a trope I find particularly endearing.

What Works Well

What stood out to me most was the palpable tension woven throughout the narrative. The slow burn of the romance, particularly in the first half of the story, was incredibly well-executed. You could practically feel the characters' yearning, and it made the eventual payoff all the more satisfying. The dynamic between the two leads is genuinely cute, and I enjoyed watching their relationship blossom amidst the complexities of their world. The second half really leans into the fluff, offering a welcome dose of sweetness after all the build-up. And the Weibo Extra? Absolutely beautiful, adding an extra layer of depth and emotion to the ending.

Areas of Concern

While the overall experience was positive, the pacing felt a little uneven at times. The initial build-up was fantastic, but there were moments where I felt the story could have delved deeper into certain aspects of the world-building or explored the complex family relationships with more nuance.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Instinctive Disobedience" is a delightful read, particularly if you're a fan of omegaverse stories with a strong focus on character development and romantic tension. While there are minor pacing issues, the strengths of the novel – the compelling romance, the engaging characters, and the satisfying conclusion – far outweigh any shortcomings. If you're looking for a sweet and heartwarming story with a touch of drama, I'd definitely recommend giving this one a try.

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