I Was Reincarnated as a Villainess, but I Want to Enjoy Peace. For the Time Being, She Plans to Stay Indoors So That She Doesn’t Get Into Trouble, Aiming to Break off Her Engagement

My Thoughts on I Was Reincarnated as a Villainess, but I Want to Enjoy Peace. For the Time Being, She Plans to Stay Indoors So That She Doesn’t Get Into Trouble, Aiming to Break off Her Engagement

First Impressions

Okay, let's be real. The title is a mouthful, and after diving in, my initial impression mirrored that of many other readers: I was a little lost. The story throws you right into the thick of things, and I found myself struggling to piece together the narrative flow. It felt disjointed, like I was reading a series of loosely connected scenes rather than a cohesive story.

What Works Well

Despite the initial struggles, there's a glimmer of potential here. The core premise – a reincarnated villainess trying to avoid drama – is classic for a reason. I can see the appeal of a protagonist actively trying not to be the center of attention in a fantasy world obsessed with courtly intrigue. The idea of her attempts to break off her engagement while staying indoors is also quite funny and interesting. There's potential for some great comedic moments and clever subversions of the genre.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the execution really hinders the story's strengths. The writing itself is a significant hurdle. The dialogue often feels stilted and unnatural, and the narration jumps around without clear transitions. It's difficult to get a solid grasp on the characters' motivations or the overall plot because the writing is so fragmented. I suspect a lot of this stems from translation issues, but whatever the cause, it makes for a frustrating reading experience. While the underlying story seems to follow the familiar "reincarnated MC changes everything" trope, the presentation makes it hard to fully appreciate.

Final Verdict

Ultimately, I Was Reincarnated as a Villainess, but I Want to Enjoy Peace. For the Time Being, She Plans to Stay Indoors So That She Doesn’t Get Into Trouble, Aiming to Break off Her Engagement is a difficult read. The core concept has promise, and the initial premise is interesting. However, the choppy writing and awkward dialogue significantly detract from the overall experience. I wanted to enjoy the humor and the protagonist's attempts to avoid trouble, but the execution made it a struggle. While I appreciate the author's ideas, I can't wholeheartedly recommend this story in its current state.