I Quit Being a Court Magician Apprentice to Become a Magical Item Craftsman

My Thoughts on I Quit Being a Court Magician Apprentice to Become a Magical Item Craftsman

First Impressions

Alright, let's dive into "I Quit Being a Court Magician Apprentice to Become a Magical Item Craftsman." The title alone grabbed my attention – a classic "dropped profession for a cooler one" vibe. I went in expecting a chill crafting story with some magical elements, and while the crafting is there, the initial chapters left me a bit perplexed.

What Works Well

The premise is definitely appealing. I'm a sucker for stories where characters forge their own path and build something from the ground up. The idea of a court magician apprentice ditching that life to become a magical item craftsman has a lot of potential. I also appreciate the blend of action, adventure, and fantasy elements. It suggests the story won't just be about sitting in a workshop, but will involve exploring the world and facing challenges. The inclusion of alchemy and artifacts also adds a layer of intrigue.

Areas of Concern

My main issue stems from the protagonist's early actions and motivations. I found myself questioning some of the character's choices, particularly regarding the secrecy surrounding the contract with Belial. The inconsistency in her behavior, specifically the shift in her approach to revealing her abilities, felt jarring. In her home country she is unwilling to reveal her contract with Belial, but once she leaves, she is unconcerned with revealing it. It's a little confusing. I needed a stronger sense of the character's internal logic and consistent decision-making. I'd have preferred the story to lean into her being low-key and only revealing her skills when absolutely necessary, or have her project the confidence you would expect from someone skilled as a researcher and battle mage.

Final Verdict

"I Quit Being a Court Magician Apprentice to Become a Magical Item Craftsman" has a promising foundation with its crafting focus and fantasy setting. However, the initial character inconsistencies and unclear motivations need to be addressed to fully engage readers. While the core concept is appealing, the execution in the early chapters needs refinement to deliver on its potential. I'm hoping the story finds its footing as it progresses, and that the protagonist's actions become more aligned with a clear and consistent personality.