Diary of the Army in the 1970s

By 大鹅踏雪泥

3.4

chineseWeb Novel

Genres

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fantasy josei romance slice of life

Chapters

104 chapters

Started

2024

Description

Wen Jiajia crossed into the 70s, opened her eyes, and found herself happy to be an aunt. The original owner, as the youngest daughter of the family, was given to city people as a daughter due to the poverty of her family. Little did she know that her adoptive parents would have a younger son of their own, and from then on, the pampered daughter became a nanny and a workhorse. When her adoptive parents forced her to marry for profit, she rebelled and ruined their plans. To avoid further trouble, she broke off relations with her adoptive parents and returned to the countryside. However, her unlucky life didn’t end there. On the day the original owner returned to her hometown, her father, mother, and sisters all died from eating poisonous mushrooms. The family was left with only the original owner and two children. The original owner stood at the door of the house, fainted from fear in the face of death, and when she woke up again, she had become Wen Jiajia. Wen Jiajia thought, “To be honest, I want to die too.” — There were many well-wishers in the village, all concerned about the aunt and her nephews. They said, “You are an aunt and an elder. You can’t ignore your two sisters’ children.” Wen Jiajia hesitated and replied, “Okay, I’ll take care of them.” They said, “How can you survive now that your family is dead, and you have no savings or strong labor to support you?” Wen Jiajia nodded, “Yes, how will we live?” They said, “The soldier who took you to the hospital is kind to you. Maybe you should marry him!” Wen Jiajia was shocked, “What? Repay kindness with enmity?” A few months later, Wen Jiajia, burdened with money, followed the unlucky soldier to the army…

Publication Information

Original Publisher: jjwxc
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

Diary of the Army in the 1970s Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator

My Thoughts on Diary of the Army in the 1970s

"Diary of the Army in the 1970s" promised a slice-of-life journey with a female protagonist navigating a historical setting. While it delivered on some aspects, I found myself wanting more depth and polish. It's a decent read, but it didn't quite reach its full potential.

First Impressions

The premise immediately grabbed my attention. A strong female lead in a 1970s army setting sounded like a refreshing take on the transmigration genre. I went in expecting a blend of military life, romance, and personal growth. The initial chapters were promising, introducing the protagonist and her family dynamics, but the story felt like it was missing something.

What Works Well

The focus on the protagonist's journey is definitely a strength. We follow her as she adapts to farming life, joins the army, works in a factory, and eventually attends college. I appreciated the author's attempts to portray a realistic character, one who acknowledges the difficulties of her situation. The novel shines when it delves into the details of food and cooking. The descriptions of meals and ingredients were vivid and engaging, adding a unique flavor to the story. Although brief, the romance was sweet and heartwarming. I enjoyed the snippets of interaction between the MC and her love interest.

Areas of Concern

One of my main issues was the pacing. The story jumps forward in time, glossing over potentially interesting events. I wish the author had spent more time developing the characters and exploring the nuances of their relationships. I also felt that the golden finger was underutilized. Its limited use made it feel almost irrelevant to the overall plot. The translation quality also detracted from my enjoyment. The grammar was often awkward, making it difficult to fully immerse myself in the story. Finally, the title is misleading. It should be renamed to include a reference to food, since such a large percentage of the novel is dedicated to it.

Final Verdict

"Diary of the Army in the 1970s" is a passable read for those looking to scratch their transmigration itch. It has moments of charm, particularly in its descriptions of food and the protagonist's realistic struggles. However, the uneven pacing, underdeveloped characters, and translation issues prevent it from reaching its full potential. I'd recommend it with reservations, especially to readers who are new to the genre.

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