Because of You

My Thoughts on Because of You

"Because of You" is a completed original web novel that I recently decided to dive into, knowing it was a story with some rather mixed reception. The tags promised a tale of betrayal, romance, and recovery, a combination that often piques my interest. However, the path to enjoying this story proved to be a bit more complicated than I initially anticipated.

First Impressions

My first impression was definitely impacted by the unique narrative style. The author employs a technique where the main story is interspersed with commentary, almost like the main characters are watching their past unfold and providing real-time reactions. This is presented through parenthetical statements and quick interjections. To be honest, it was initially jarring. It took me some time to understand who was saying what and when.

What Works Well

Once I got accustomed to the narrative style, I found the story had some compelling elements. The core of the story is a classic one: a protagonist betrayed and hurt, finding solace and eventually love. I appreciated that the protagonist doesn't dwell in bitterness forever and moves on to find happiness. The development between the main leads is genuinely sweet and heartwarming. There is a certain charm in watching them rebuild their lives and find joy together amidst the initial pain. The romance is done well, and if I was able to ignore the ending, I would have been happy to see it through.

Areas of Concern

The unusual narration style is definitely a double-edged sword. While it adds a unique flavor, it can also be confusing and distracting. The author's choice might set it apart, but not necessarily in a positive way for all readers. For some, it may be a hurdle too difficult to overcome.

Final Verdict

"Because of You" is a mixed bag. It presents an interesting premise and a sweet romance, but the unconventional narration and the somewhat controversial ending hold it back. If you're willing to invest the time to understand the narrative style and can potentially overlook the ending, you might find an enjoyable story of recovery and love. However, be prepared for a potentially bumpy ride. For me, it lands somewhere in the middle – a story with potential that falls short of its full promise.