After My Daughter Died of Depression, I Was Reborn!

My Thoughts on After My Daughter Died of Depression, I Was Reborn!

"After My Daughter Died of Depression, I Was Reborn!" presents a heavy premise: a second chance to make amends for past mistakes after a devastating loss. I went into this novel hoping for a story of redemption and healing, but my experience was mixed.

First Impressions

The initial chapters certainly grabbed my attention. The setup – a man haunted by his daughter's suicide and reborn to an earlier point in his life – is compelling. I was immediately invested in seeing how he would use his second chance to be a better father and husband. The early focus on his regret and determination to change was well-executed.

What Works Well

The emotional core of the story is undeniably powerful. The protagonist's grief and guilt are palpable, and his desire to reconnect with his wife and daughter resonates. I found myself rooting for him, even knowing the mistakes he had made in his previous life. The slice-of-life elements, particularly the interactions with his young daughter, were often heartwarming and provided a welcome contrast to the heavier themes. The business aspects of the novel, while not groundbreaking, were serviceable enough to move the plot along. I also appreciated the calm and caring nature of the protagonist, which made him easier to invest in despite his past flaws.

Areas of Concern

However, the execution falters in some areas. At times, the protagonist's internal monologues about his past mistakes felt repetitive and slowed down the pacing. I also found the dialogue to be somewhat stilted and unnatural, particularly in the early chapters. While the premise is strong, the writing doesn't always live up to its potential. I feel that the story could benefit from more nuanced character development and more engaging interactions between the protagonist and his family.

Final Verdict

"After My Daughter Died of Depression, I Was Reborn!" has a compelling premise and some genuinely touching moments. While the execution is uneven and the writing could be improved, the emotional core of the story is strong enough to keep readers invested. If you're looking for a story of redemption and familial love, and you're willing to overlook some flaws, this novel might be worth a try. However, be prepared for a somewhat bumpy ride.