“You’re Not Even Going to Try This?” Novel Review

My Thoughts on “You’re Not Even Going to Try This?”

Alright, let's dive into "You're Not Even Going to Try This?" This novel had me chuckling from the get-go, and while it wasn't perfect, it definitely left a smile on my face. It's a light and fluffy read that's perfect if you're looking for something easy and fun.

First Impressions

My first impression was definitely positive. The comedic undertones are strong, and the awkward protagonist immediately drew me in. The premise itself is hilarious, and I was eager to see how the relationship between the MC and ML would develop. It's the kind of story that promises a good time, and for the most part, it delivers.

What Works Well

The comedy is definitely the strongest point. I found myself laughing out loud at the ridiculous situations the characters get into. The side characters are absolutely golden, and I particularly loved the parents of both the MC and ML – they're far from the typical distant parental figures you often see. The main relationship is sweet and doting, with a clear power dynamic that works well. The ML's straightforward pursuit of the MC is charming, and I appreciated how the age gap wasn't really felt due to their mutual inexperience. The coworkers' obsession with the main couple's dynamic added another layer of humor that I thoroughly enjoyed.

Areas of Concern

While the beginning was hilarious, the humor did become a bit repetitive as the story progressed. The jokes, like the coworkers' reactions to the ML, started to feel recycled. I also felt the initial development of feelings between the MC and ML was a bit rushed, relying more on the MC being "nice" and giving attention. While the characters are well-written, they sometimes fall into predictable archetypes, lacking significant depth or development. The lack of steamy scenes might disappoint some looking for more explicit content.

Final Verdict

Overall, I'd give "You're Not Even Going to Try This?" a solid 4 out of 5 stars. It's a delightful and funny novel that's perfect for a quick, lighthearted read. While it has its flaws, the strengths definitely outweigh the weaknesses. If you're looking for a fluffy, comedic BL with a sweet romance, this one is definitely worth your time. Just be prepared for some repetitive jokes and a fast-paced romance!