While Others Became Female Leads In Romantic Fantasy Novels, I Became A Closet Monster. Novel Review

My Thoughts on While Others Became Female Leads In Romantic Fantasy Novels, I Became A Closet Monster.

First Impressions

Okay, the title alone grabbed my attention. "While Others Became Female Leads In Romantic Fantasy Novels, I Became A Closet Monster"? I immediately needed to know more. The premise is definitely unique: a protagonist reincarnated as a literal closet monster, bound to a wardrobe and able to interact with the world in quirky, limited ways. It sounded like a recipe for either brilliant comedy or complete disaster, and I was eager to find out which.

What Works Well

The charm of this story lies in the sweet, developing relationship between our closet monster, Marilyn, and the abused young Duke's son, Dedrick. I found myself completely invested in their interactions. Marilyn's energetic personality and desire to protect Dedrick from his horrible family create a heartwarming dynamic. The author does a great job of portraying Dedrick's gradual growth as he learns to trust and rely on Marilyn, his only ally in a hostile environment. It's the kind of found-family trope that just hits right. I also appreciated the mystery surrounding Marilyn's past and the unique rules governing her existence as a closet monster. The slapstick moments, born from her limited interaction with the world, are genuinely funny.

Areas of Concern

While the core relationship is compelling, the pacing can feel slow at times. The constant abuse that Dedrick endures, while essential to his character development, can become repetitive and frustrating. The villains, while clearly defined, sometimes lack depth, and their cruelty can feel cartoonish. Also, while the FL has many powers, some readers may find that she is not taking full advantage of the powers that she possesses, but that is only a minor issue.

Final Verdict

Despite some pacing and villain-depth issues, "While Others Became Female Leads In Romantic Fantasy Novels, I Became A Closet Monster" is a fun, heartwarming read with a truly unique premise. The central relationship is adorable, and the mystery surrounding the closet monster's existence is intriguing. If you're looking for a lighthearted fantasy with a touch of found-family sweetness, I'd definitely recommend giving this one a try.