Villain – Peeking at the Diary, the Female Leads’ Personas Collapse

My Thoughts on Villain – Peeking at the Diary, the Female Leads’ Personas Collapse

"Villain – Peeking at the Diary, the Female Leads’ Personas Collapse" presents an intriguing premise: a villain protagonist whose inner thoughts, revealed through his diary, throw the established plot into delightful chaos. However, after diving into the available chapters, I've found that the execution is a mixed bag, leaving me with a complicated impression.

First Impressions

Initially, the concept hooked me. The idea of deconstructing the typical urban novel tropes with a diary-reading twist seemed fresh and full of comedic potential. I was eager to see how the protagonist's attempts to play the villain would be hilariously derailed by the female leads gaining insight into his true thoughts.

What Works Well

The humor is definitely a strong point. I found myself chuckling at the misunderstandings and the protagonist's obliviousness to the unfolding chaos. The initial premise of the female leads not immediately falling for the villain after reading his diary is a welcome subversion of the trope, adding a layer of complexity that I appreciated. The world-building shows promise, creating a solid foundation for the unfolding events, especially in the early chapters.

Areas of Concern

My biggest reservation lies in the protagonist's actions. While the premise hinges on the diary creating chaos, his continued attempts to adhere to the original plot, even as it spirals out of control, can be frustrating. It feels like a missed opportunity to fully embrace the deconstruction of the genre. Additionally, the system, which rewards the protagonist for writing in his diary, feels somewhat underutilized. The rewards of strength and money seem almost irrelevant given his role in the story, which is more about social interactions and plot manipulation than physical prowess. The protagonist's character may shift and lose some of his charm as the story progresses. The initial appeal of a cunning villain might fade as he potentially transforms into a more generic, "face-slapping" type.

Final Verdict

"Villain – Peeking at the Diary, the Female Leads’ Personas Collapse" has the potential to be a truly hilarious and engaging read. However, the execution is uneven, with the protagonist's actions and potential character shift being significant drawbacks. If you're looking for a lighthearted comedy with a unique premise and can tolerate some frustrating character choices, this might be worth a try, especially in the first 200 chapters. However, be aware that the story may lose its initial charm as it progresses.