Unfortunately, Not a Grown Up

By long qi, 龙柒

3.5

CompletedchineseWeb Novel

Genres

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comedy romance school life

Chapters

82 chapters

Started

2021

Description

During the winter vacation, Ji Pianpian, whose future has already been decided, played a popular online game, and met the hateful man who “killed” her thousands of times. Ji Pianpian: “You have guts to kill me again!” Shen Du stabbed her in the chest with a sword, mercilessly. Later, the god, who chased his wife at the crematorium, apologized: “Don’t be angry, I was blind at the beginning.” Ji Pianpian vows to be shameless and kill him thousands of times: “Lie flat and wait.” Du-shen: “Okay, baby.” After a while, Ji Pianpian received a video request—— The man leaned against the head of the bed, his black shirt was fully unbuttoned, his tie loosened to his collarbone. Then the hem of his clothes stretched along his strong chest to his abdominal muscles, while the belt locks his pants and his mermaid line is sexy and ambiguous. In the video, Shen Du’s brows and eyes are lazy, and his accent is seductive: “I’m lying flat, waiting for you.” Ji Pianpian covered her eyes, her voice trembling: “…who, who made you lie on the bed!” Later, when he learned that his little girlfriend had just turned eighteen, Shen Du’s black eyelashes drooped: “You are still young, when you grow up you should resent me as an old man.” Ji Pianpian: “How old should I be?” Shen Du said slowly: “In another five years.” Ji Pianpian wanted to say something but stopped, holding out a sentence: “…It doesn’t have to be five years.” Shen Du: “?” Ji Pianpian: “You’re already eating tender grass, you old cow!”

Publication Information

Original Publisher: jjwxc
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

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My Thoughts on Unfortunately, Not a Grown Up

"Unfortunately, Not a Grown Up" promised a fun blend of comedy, romance, and school life, and for the most part, it delivered a pretty enjoyable experience. It's definitely a novel that knows its audience, and while it has some quirks, it's easy to see why it's captured some readers' hearts.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the premise of a coming-of-age story set against the backdrop of university life and online gaming. The synopsis hinted at a protagonist with hidden depths, and I was eager to dive into her journey of self-discovery. The early chapters definitely hooked me with their lighthearted tone and promise of romance.

What Works Well

The humor is definitely a strong point. There were moments where I genuinely laughed out loud, and the comedic timing felt natural. The female lead, despite her flaws, is relatable in her struggles with insecurity and trying to navigate the complexities of adulthood. The gaming element, while present, doesn't overwhelm the main plot, which I appreciated. It adds a nice layer to the characters and their interactions without becoming the sole focus. I found myself invested in the central romance.

Areas of Concern

While I enjoyed the story overall, there were a few elements that felt a bit rushed or underdeveloped. The pacing could be uneven at times. The age gap between the main characters, while not inherently problematic, is treated as a bigger issue than it actually seems to be, which I found a little odd.

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Final Verdict

Despite some minor flaws in pacing and character development, "Unfortunately, Not a Grown Up" is a worthwhile read if you're looking for a lighthearted and engaging story. The humor, relatable protagonist, and sweet romance make it an enjoyable escape. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars.

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