The Story Of The Banished Side After Banishing The Party. The Party Was Weakened, But We Aim To Be The Best In The World Novel Review

My Thoughts on The Story Of The Banished Side After Banishing The Party. The Party Was Weakened, But We Aim to Be The Best In The World

Alright, let's dive into this web novel with the rather lengthy title. I went in with a bit of trepidation, given the overall rating, but I always try to keep an open mind. The premise – focusing on the party after they banish the seemingly crucial member – definitely had potential for a fresh take on a well-worn trope.

First Impressions

My first impression, honestly, mirrored a lot of the concerns others have expressed. The initial chapters felt…clunky. The characters, particularly Dale and Athena, didn't immediately grab me as individuals I wanted to root for. There was a sense of disconnect, and I struggled to understand their motivations fully.

What Works Well

It wasn't all bad though, and I can see why some readers stuck around. The author deserves credit for attempting to subvert the typical "banished hero" narrative. The idea of exploring the consequences and struggles of the remaining party members as they try to achieve their goals without their former teammate is genuinely interesting. I also appreciate the focus on the party trying to grow and learn without relying on outside help.

Areas of Concern

However, the execution is where things seem to fall apart. The characters, who are supposed to be the protagonists, come across as unlikeable and frustrating. Dale, in particular, is criticized for his seeming indifference and lack of communication, especially concerning the misunderstanding surrounding Est's banishment. This lack of communication seemed to be a common theme, leading to unnecessary drama and frustration. I also found it hard to root for this party after their treatment of Est.

Final Verdict

Ultimately, "The Story Of The Banished Side..." didn't quite live up to its potential for me. While the premise is intriguing, the execution, particularly the character writing and plot contrivances, left much to be desired. I wanted to see the party grapple with their decision and grow, but instead, I found myself increasingly frustrated with their actions and lack of self-awareness. While I applaud the author for attempting a fresh perspective, I think this story needs some serious revisions to truly shine. For now, I'd say proceed with caution.