The Love Story of A Passerby

My Thoughts on The Love Story of A Passerby

Alright, let's dive into "The Love Story of A Passerby." This yaoi novel promised a blend of comedy, romance, and a mature storyline, and after reading, I have some thoughts to share.

First Impressions

The premise immediately grabbed me. We've got an average-looking protagonist, smack-dab in an office romance, navigating the tricky waters of a boss-subordinate relationship. The "passerby" concept intrigued me, suggesting a character who feels a bit invisible, a wallflower in his own life. I was curious to see how the author would handle this, especially with the added dynamic of an older love interest.

What Works Well

One of the strongest aspects of this novel is the protagonist himself. I found him quite likeable. The story’s strength lies in its portrayal of the awkwardness and gradual development of the relationship between the leads. The author does a solid job of depicting their interactions, making the progression feel believable within the novel's length. The humor is understated, which I appreciated, and the author's notes added a touch of subversiveness that enhanced the reading experience. This made the whole experience more enjoyable and gave an extra layer to the narrative.

Areas of Concern

My main reservation revolves around the somewhat passive nature of the main character. While his self-deprecating humor and self-awareness are initially endearing, it can feel like he's simply drifting through life, with things happening to him rather than because of him. I also felt that the reasons behind the ML's attraction could have been explored in greater detail. The "pure" and "innocent" qualities attributed to the MC felt a bit cliché.

Final Verdict

Overall, "The Love Story of A Passerby" is an enjoyable, quick read. It's a heartwarming story with a charming protagonist and a sweet romance. Despite some minor flaws, the novel's strengths lie in its humor, character development, and realistic (ish) portrayal of relationships. If you're looking for a lighthearted yaoi novel with a touch of wish-fulfillment fantasy, this one might just be up your alley.