The Dungeon Harem I Built With My Elf S*x S*ave (WN) Novel Review
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By hino akari, 火野 あかり
46 chapters
2019
Description
A reincarnated young man named Marth wants to conquer dungeons together with his elf s*ave, Lilia. However, he hardly made any progress due to him making love with her every day. Then one day after they did it, Marth was told “Normally human males only have penises that are as big as a child’s finger, no?” such shocking words by Lilia after she was satisfied. Marth knew that his beast was on the big side but he didn’t think that it would be on the same level as a cheat. With Lilia’s suggestion, he decided to steal some girls over from other parties to increase their number of companions. He is stealing girls but he doesn’t get his girls stolen. It’s a brutal story, not a heartwarming one He goes around forcing others onto himself! Will he ever archive his goal to conquer the dungeons?
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- shueisha
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
The Dungeon Harem I Built With My Elf S*x S*ave (WN) Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on The Dungeon Harem I Built With My Elf Sx Save (WN)
This web novel definitely piqued my interest with its… direct title. "The Dungeon Harem I Built With My Elf Sx Save (WN)" doesn't exactly beat around the bush, does it? Going in, I knew I was diving headfirst into the adult fantasy genre, and my experience ended up being pretty much what I expected: a mixed bag.
First Impressions
Initially, I was intrigued by the core concept. The idea of a protagonist building a dungeon and establishing a harem within that setting has potential. The story seemed to suggest an interesting dynamic between the MC and the initial elf heroine, and I was curious to see how that relationship would develop.
What Works Well
The initial setup is arguably the strongest part of the novel. The protagonist's character, while perhaps a bit naive, is engaging enough to keep you reading. The first elf heroine is likeable, and their interactions feel somewhat compelling. The world-building, while not groundbreaking, provides a decent backdrop for the events unfolding. The "netori" aspect is present, but it's thankfully portrayed in a less aggressive manner, focusing more on the protagonist's superior qualities rather than outright stealing.
Areas of Concern
Unfortunately, the novel stumbles in several areas. The introduction of the second harem member felt lackluster, and their dynamic with the protagonist wasn't as interesting as the first. Update frequency is a major issue; infrequent releases make it hard to stay invested in the story. The romantic aspect often takes a backseat to explicit content, which can feel repetitive and less meaningful over time. While lust-driven scenes are present, they often overshadow the development of deeper emotional connections.
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Final Verdict
"The Dungeon Harem I Built With My Elf Sx Save (WN)" is a fairly typical entry in the adult fantasy genre. It has moments of promise, particularly in its initial setup and the first heroine's character. However, inconsistent updates, underdeveloped character dynamics, and a heavy focus on explicit content detract from its overall potential. If you're looking for a light, R-18 fantasy with a harem theme, this might scratch that itch. However, if you're seeking a deeper, more engaging story with consistent updates, you might want to look elsewhere. I'd give it a 3/5 for its interesting start but ultimately mediocre execution.
