The Beautiful Girl Who Asked Me to Pretend to Be Her Boyfriend Didn’t Want to Break up With Me for Some Reason
By kurage, 海月くらげ
2024
Description
My Fake Girlfriend’s Love Is Too Strong Now A second-year high school boy, Kuwazome Hakuto, lives alone away from his family. He has a scary appearance that makes his classmates avoid him, but he has been dating a girl for six months. This girl, Shirafuji Luna, is a top student, beautiful, and well-known throughout the school. The two of them show such a close relationship that people even tease them as a silly couple. However, they have a secret that they cannot tell anyone. They are not real lovers; they are bound by a fake relationship contract that Luna proposed six months ago. The contract lasts until one of them finds someone they truly like. But even after six months, the fake relationship continues, and Luna shows no signs of wanting to break up. At home, Luna clings to Hakuto and relies on him, even making him help with chores and taking care of her, which she is not good at. After living this way for six months, Hakuto says, “We are in a fake relationship, you know.” Luna replies, “That’s true.” He then asks, “When will this relationship end?” She simply answers, “I don’t know.” They continue their relationship as fake lovers while exploring each other’s feelings. It’s a love comedy about a fake girlfriend who won’t break up and the adjustments of their feelings for each other in a semi-cohabiting situation.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- kakuyomu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
The Beautiful Girl Who Asked Me to Pretend to Be Her Boyfriend Didn’t Want to Break up With Me for Some Reason Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on The Beautiful Girl Who Asked Me to Pretend to Be Her Boyfriend Didn’t Want to Break up With Me for Some Reason
Okay, let's dive into this title – and what a title it is! "The Beautiful Girl Who Asked Me to Pretend to Be Her Boyfriend Didn’t Want to Break up With Me for Some Reason." It's a mouthful, but it certainly grabbed my attention. The premise is classic rom-com material, promising a blend of humor, awkwardness, and maybe a touch of the unexpected. After reading the available chapters, here are my thoughts.
First Impressions
Initially, I was intrigued. The setup is pretty standard: an average guy gets caught up in a fake relationship with a popular girl. The potential for comedic misunderstandings and heartfelt moments is definitely there. I was ready for a lighthearted escape into the world of high school romance.
What Works Well
The core concept is genuinely appealing. Who doesn't love a good fake-dating trope? The female lead's reluctance to end the charade hints at deeper feelings, which is a classic hook. I could see the potential for a sweet and engaging story as the characters navigate their feelings and the complications of their pretend relationship. The initial chapters establish the dependence the female lead has on the male lead, something that could be interesting as the story progresses.
Areas of Concern
However, the execution seems to be where things falter. I found some inconsistencies in the writing style. The shifts between first and third-person perspectives felt jarring and disrupted my immersion in the story. Dialogue attribution was also a bit unclear at times, making it difficult to follow who was speaking. Additionally, the pacing felt a little slow. By the fifth chapter, I was hoping for a bit more progression in the plot beyond the established dependence. It felt like the story was dragging its feet. The male lead's inferiority complex could also become tiresome if not handled carefully.
Final Verdict
"The Beautiful Girl Who Asked Me to Pretend to Be Her Boyfriend Didn’t Want to Break up With Me for Some Reason" has a lot of potential. The premise is engaging, and the characters have the groundwork for interesting development. However, improvements in the writing quality and pacing are necessary to truly elevate this story. For now, I'm cautiously optimistic. I'll be keeping an eye on it to see if it improves, but it needs significant work before I'd fully recommend it.
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