Surrounded Mob wants to Quietly Withdraw

My Thoughts on Surrounded Mob wants to Quietly Withdraw

"Surrounded Mob Wants to Quietly Withdraw" is a web novel that piqued my interest with its intriguing premise: a protagonist transmigrating into a mob character in a world where the heroine is also a reincarnated individual. While the concept held promise, my experience reading the available chapters has been a mixed bag.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the potential for a unique spin on the isekai genre. The idea of a "mob" character trying to navigate a world where they're surrounded by love interests, all while trying to stay out of the main plot, seemed like a fun and potentially comedic setup. I dove in hoping for a lighthearted read with some interesting character dynamics.

What Works Well

Despite some of the criticisms, there are aspects of the story that I found enjoyable. The premise itself is compelling, and when the story manages to slow down, the interactions between the characters can be quite cute. I appreciated the protagonist's lack of extreme denseness, which can be a common trope in these types of stories. The idea of the ML falling first is also compelling. The translator is doing a good job to make it understandable.

Areas of Concern

However, I have to admit that I struggled with the pacing and overall coherence of the narrative. The story often feels rushed, jumping between events without adequate explanation or transition. This made it difficult to fully grasp the plot and connect with the characters. Several readers have noted this issue, and I share their sentiment. The lack of depth in character development also left me wanting more. The ML, in particular, feels underdeveloped, lacking a strong presence despite his supposed importance.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Surrounded Mob Wants to Quietly Withdraw" has potential, but it ultimately falls short due to its rushed pacing and underdeveloped characters. While I found some aspects of the story enjoyable, the lack of coherence and depth made it difficult to fully invest in the narrative. It might be worth checking out if you're looking for a quick and light read, but don't expect a deeply immersive or emotionally resonant experience. I'm giving it a 3/5.