Starting from becoming the King of Saiyans

My Thoughts on Starting from becoming the King of Saiyans

First Impressions

Alright, let's dive into "Starting from becoming the King of Saiyans." As a fanfiction, it immediately piqued my interest, especially with the transmigration and system elements thrown in. The premise of becoming king of the Saiyans definitely sets the stage for a power fantasy, but with the potential for some interesting world-building within the Dragon Ball universe. I went in hoping for a fresh take, and while I found some aspects enjoyable, there were also some things that gave me pause.

What Works Well

What I appreciated most about this novel was the focus on developing the Saiyan race as a whole. It’s refreshing to see a protagonist actively working to improve the lives and abilities of those around him, rather than solely chasing personal power. This approach creates a sense of camaraderie and makes the "King of the Saiyans" title feel earned. The challenges the protagonist faces seem grounded within the Dragon Ball universe, and it feels like there's a genuine effort to maintain some semblance of canon. I also found the pacing to be well-managed, with the protagonist's successes feeling earned rather than handed to him.

Areas of Concern

However, I did find myself occasionally frustrated with some of the protagonist's decisions. There were moments where his actions felt a bit... questionable, especially considering his past life. Making rookie mistakes, like not ensuring an opponent is truly defeated or revealing crucial information unnecessarily, detracted from the overall experience. While these moments didn't completely ruin the story, they did occasionally pull me out of the immersion.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Starting from becoming the King of Saiyans" is a decent read for fans of Dragon Ball fanfiction. It offers a unique perspective on the universe, focusing on the development of the Saiyan race under the protagonist's rule. While there are some areas where the writing could be tighter, the novel provides an engaging experience with a protagonist striving to create a better future for his people. I'd recommend giving it a try if you're looking for a different spin on the typical Dragon Ball power fantasy.