On the First Day of My Broken Engagement, I Was Rewarded with the Supreme Bone!

My Thoughts on On the First Day of My Broken Engagement, I Was Rewarded with the Supreme Bone!

Alright, buckle up, because I've been diving into the world of betrayed protagonists and suddenly-overpowered MCs with On the First Day of My Broken Engagement, I Was Rewarded with the Supreme Bone! It's a mouthful, I know, but the premise is fairly straightforward: guy gets dumped, guy gets power, guy gets revenge (and maybe a harem along the way?).

First Impressions

The initial hook is pretty strong. The broken engagement trope is a classic for a reason, and the promise of instant power is always appealing. The story throws you right into the action, and the initial chapters are engaging. It definitely had me curious to see how the MC would use his newfound abilities.

What Works Well

The wish-fulfillment aspect is definitely a strength. The MC's ability to see and steal fortunes is a fun twist on the standard cultivation system, and it allows for some creative problem-solving. I found myself enjoying the earlier chapters as he outsmarted his rivals and snatched opportunities. The pacing in the beginning keeps you hooked, and the lack of "random young masters" at the start is a definite plus.

Areas of Concern

As the story progresses, the novelty seems to wear off a bit. The MC's personality starts to feel a little bland, and he falls into the trap of being "always ever so above his foes." While power fantasies are enjoyable, there needs to be some vulnerability or depth to keep things interesting. Additionally, the romance tag feels a little misleading, at least in the earlier chapters. While the MC does get married and even has a child relatively early on, these relationships don't seem to be a major focus, which might disappoint readers looking for a strong romantic subplot. The family aspect seems to be glossed over in favor of battles and power-ups.

Final Verdict

On the First Day of My Broken Engagement, I Was Rewarded with the Supreme Bone! is a decent read if you're looking for a straightforward power fantasy with a bit of a twist. The beginning is strong, and the fortune-stealing mechanic is fun. However, the bland MC, lack of romantic depth, and potentially problematic plot points might turn some readers away. I'd recommend giving it a try, but be aware of its flaws going in. I'm giving it a tentative 3/5.