My Dad is My Mom’s Mortal Enemy

By 冬日牛角包

3.6

CompletedchineseWeb Novel

Genres

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romance

Chapters

Started

2023

Description

The Shao and Cheng families have been sworn enemies for generations, though few outsiders know the exact details of their feud. What is known to all is the Shao family’s three cardinal rules: The Shao family must not cooperate with the Chengs, must not intermarry with the Chengs, and must never appear with the Chengs at any public event. One day, an adorable little girl looking like a doll, wearing a puffy pink dress, pink hair clip, and pink backpack, walked into the lobby on the first floor of the Shao Group building. The receptionist thought she was some child who had wandered away from home. But the little girl solemnly said, “I want to see your Shao Group CEO, Shao Chengze.” Seeing the girl’s pink outfit, the receptionist knew she must be from a wealthy and noble family to dare to address their CEO by his full name. She couldn’t be the daughter of some high-ranking Shao Group executive? Smiling warmly, she asked, “Little one, could you tell me your parents’ names?” The girl tilted her head. “My mommy is Cheng Jinlan.” Cheng…Jinlan?! Second Miss Cheng Jinlan of the Cheng family?! She never thought she’d see the day a Cheng would set foot in the Shao Group building. What a miracle! “As for my dad, I’ve come today to get some of Shao Chengze’s hair for a DNA test. Once I have his hair, I’ll know if he’s my dad or not.” The girl’s crisp words rippled outwards from the front desk through the bustling first floor lobby. Everyone who heard froze in shock, jaws dropping. Everyone except Shao Chengze, who had just stepped out of the elevator surrounded by a group. He looked at the girl in pink through narrowed, fox-like eyes. Cheng Liqi recognized Shao Chengze and covered her mouth in an “ah-oh”. She decided that even if Shao Chengze wasn’t her dad, she’d have to help Cheng Jinlan get this man. She liked his eyes. They were just like hers. So pretty.

Publication Information

Original Publisher: jjwxc
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

My Dad is My Mom’s Mortal Enemy Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator

My Thoughts on My Dad is My Mom’s Mortal Enemy

This web novel promised a blend of romance, family drama, and a dash of enemies-to-lovers, and while it delivered on some fronts, it stumbled on others. Overall, I found it an enjoyable, albeit slightly frustrating, read.

First Impressions

The premise immediately grabbed my attention: a modern-day Romeo and Juliet with a secret child thrown into the mix. The initial chapters focused on the daughter finding her father, which I found quite heartwarming. I was definitely invested in seeing how the parents would navigate their complicated history and whether they could overcome their animosity.

What Works Well

The daughter, Liqi, is undoubtedly the star of the show. Many readers, including myself, found her incredibly cute, smart, and a major catalyst for bringing her parents back together. Her interactions with both parents were genuinely heartwarming and often comedic. The "guy chasing after the girl" trope is well-executed, with the male lead putting in significant effort to win back the female lead. The plot has a unique, fresh feel, especially with the inclusion of the adorable baby girl. It's undeniably fluffy and warmhearted, perfect for a lighthearted read.

Areas of Concern

The translation definitely needs some work. I noticed several reviewers mentioned confusion with character names, particularly the male lead's. This made it difficult to follow the plot at times and required some mental gymnastics to decipher who was being referenced. Also, the female lead's "tsundere" personality occasionally bordered on annoying. The animosity between the families, which was initially portrayed as extremely serious, seemed to fade into the background later in the story, which felt a bit inconsistent. Finally, some readers were disappointed with the female characters' actions and motivations, finding them somewhat unfair or illogical.

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Final Verdict

Despite its flaws, My Dad is My Mom’s Mortal Enemy is a worthwhile read, especially if you're a fan of family-centric stories with a strong focus on childcare. The daughter is a scene-stealer, and the overall plot is engaging enough to keep you invested. Just be prepared to navigate some translation issues and perhaps a few frustrating character choices along the way.

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