Little Train, Dirty, Dirty, Dirty!

My Thoughts on Little Train, Dirty, Dirty, Dirty!

Alright, buckle up, because I just finished reading "Little Train, Dirty, Dirty, Dirty!" and I have some thoughts. This short and smutty yaoi novel definitely delivers on its promise of mature content, but it's not without its quirks.

First Impressions

The premise is definitely intriguing. We have a Shou who, for reasons, decides to cross-dress online and flirt with the Gong. The Gong, initially believing the Shou is female, responds in kind, setting the stage for some steamy situations and eventual realization that they're both, shall we say, exploring new territories. The whole "straight men turned bent" trope is definitely at play here, and if you're into that, you'll likely find this appealing.

What Works Well

The seduction aspect is pretty well done. The back-and-forth between the characters, especially the Shou's initial boldness followed by his shyness when the Gong reciprocates, creates a fun dynamic. The "hiding true identity" element adds another layer of intrigue, and the fact that they'd met before in the real world (before the online cross-dressing shenanigans began) adds a nice touch of fate or destiny. The author clearly knows how to write explicit scenes, and they are, well, explicit. If you're looking for a quick, smutty read with a bit of plot thrown in, this definitely delivers.

Areas of Concern

While the overall plot is okay, I did notice some disjointedness towards the end, particularly in the last few chapters. There were moments where it felt like paragraphs were missing, leaving me a little confused about the flow of events. This could be due to translation issues or perhaps just a rushed ending. It didn’t ruin the story for me, but it was noticeable enough to mention.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Little Train, Dirty, Dirty, Dirty!" is a decent read if you're in the mood for a short, smutty yaoi with a cross-dressing twist. While the plot might not be the most groundbreaking, and the ending feels a bit rushed, the explicit scenes are well-written, and the characters are engaging enough to keep you entertained. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars. It's a fun, quick indulgence, just don't expect a literary masterpiece.