Let Go Of That Primordial Man

My Thoughts on Let Go Of That Primordial Man

First Impressions

"Let Go Of That Primordial Man" pulled me in with its premise: a protagonist transported to a tribal society with the ability to travel between worlds. The blend of action, martial arts, romance, and xuanhuan elements promised a wild ride through ancient times and cultivation. I was definitely curious to see how the author would balance these genres.

What Works Well

The initial world-building is interesting. The descriptions of the tribal society and the protagonist's integration into it are well-paced and provide a solid foundation for the story. The concept of inter-world travel is also intriguing, offering the potential for diverse settings and challenges. I appreciated the MC's determination to grow stronger in a harsh environment; his resourcefulness in using his modern knowledge to improve his situation is a definite plus. The action sequences, when they occur, are also well-written and engaging.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the pacing and plot development left me wanting more. While the world-hopping ability is a core element, it felt underutilized. I was hoping for more exploration and strategic power-leveling using resources from both worlds. Instead, the focus seemed to be heavily weighted towards trading and selling goods, which, while practical, slowed down the overall narrative. Also, the lack of a clear, overarching plot beyond the protagonist's desire for strength made it difficult to stay fully invested. I found myself wishing for a more defined goal or a compelling antagonist to drive the story forward. The training sequences, while present, felt reactive rather than proactive, only occurring after the MC faced defeat.

Final Verdict

"Let Go Of That Primordial Man" has a lot of potential, with a unique premise and interesting world-building. However, the slow pacing, underdeveloped plot, and underutilization of the world-traveling aspect hold it back from being truly great. If you're looking for a novel with a strong emphasis on character growth and a relatively relaxed pace, this might be worth a try. However, if you're seeking a fast-paced, plot-driven story with constant action and exploration, you might find yourself wanting more. Ultimately, it's a novel with a solid foundation but in need of more focused direction.