I’m What One would call the Heroine, but since None of Us Believe it I’m Already Thinking of Withdrawing

My Thoughts on I’m What One would call the Heroine, but since None of Us Believe it I’m Already Thinking of Withdrawing

This web novel, "I’m What One would call the Heroine, but since None of Us Believe it I’m Already Thinking of Withdrawing," certainly offers a unique premise within the shoujo genre. The title alone piqued my interest, promising a protagonist who’s perhaps a little too self-aware for her own good. After diving in, I found it to be a quick and mostly enjoyable read, though not without a few quirks.

First Impressions

The initial chapters threw me for a loop. The pacing is incredibly fast, and the narrative style, heavily reliant on internal monologues and dialogue, can be a little disorienting at first. It felt like jumping into the middle of a conversation already in progress, and I had to actively work to piece together the plot.

What Works Well

Despite the initial confusion, the story has a certain charm. The concept of a heroine who's a bit of a "ditz," as some readers put it, is refreshing. She's not the typical flawless protagonist, and her interactions with the other characters, particularly her friendship with Eury, are genuinely heartwarming. I also appreciated the subversion of typical reverse harem tropes. The male leads have their own agendas, and the heroine's role in their lives is far from what you'd expect. The crown prince is definitely a piece of work!

Areas of Concern

My main issue with the novel lies in its comprehensibility. The fast pace and reliance on dialogue sometimes made it difficult to fully grasp the motivations of the characters and the overall plot. I found myself re-reading sections to make sure I hadn't missed anything. Also, while the open ending leaves room for imagination, it might not satisfy readers looking for a more definitive conclusion.

Final Verdict

Overall, "I’m What One would call the Heroine, but since None of Us Believe it I’m Already Thinking of Withdrawing" is a cute and fast-paced oneshot that offers a refreshing twist on the shoujo genre. While the writing style might be a bit confusing at times, the charming characters and unexpected plot developments make it a worthwhile read. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars. Just be prepared for a bit of a mental workout as you piece everything together!