I’ll Make It a Bad Ending Like a Villain

My Thoughts on I’ll Make It a Bad Ending Like a Villain

"I’ll Make It a Bad Ending Like a Villain" is a web novel that initially piqued my interest with its premise of a protagonist reliving her life to avoid a tragic fate. While it has its moments, I found myself ultimately torn between its potential and its shortcomings.

First Impressions

The initial chapters drew me in with the promise of a clever and calculating female lead. The idea of someone leveraging their past lives to proactively shape a different future is compelling. I was definitely eager to see how the protagonist would navigate the aristocratic world and subvert expectations.

What Works Well

I appreciate the story's attempt to break away from typical genre tropes. The main character isn't portrayed as a Mary Sue, and her struggles feel somewhat believable. I also enjoyed the absence of over-the-top misogyny, a refreshing change of pace compared to similar novels. The author deserves credit for creating a female lead who, despite her flaws, is determined to carve her own path. I found the slow-burn romance, though not central, added a subtle layer of intrigue.

Areas of Concern

However, I also encountered several issues that hampered my enjoyment. The plot sometimes felt disjointed, with abrupt transitions and inconsistencies that pulled me out of the story. I struggled to connect with some of the characters, who often felt one-dimensional and served primarily to advance the plot. The protagonist's reliance on potions to overcome challenges also bothered me. While it's understandable that she wants to survive, constantly resorting to external aids undermines her supposed growth and strategic thinking. It also felt like the author wasn't fully exploring the potential of the "multiple lives" aspect, as the protagonist often made questionable decisions that didn't align with her supposed experience.

Final Verdict

"I’ll Make It a Bad Ending Like a Villain" is a mixed bag. It has moments of brilliance and a promising premise, but it's ultimately weighed down by inconsistencies, underdeveloped characters, and questionable plot choices. While I appreciate the attempt to subvert genre conventions, the execution falls short of its potential. If you're looking for a light read with a flawed but determined female lead, this might be worth a try. However, be prepared for a bumpy ride with some frustrating moments along the way.