I Want to Sleep With You

My Thoughts on I Want to Sleep With You

First Impressions

"I Want to Sleep With You" immediately grabbed my attention with its quirky premise. A cold cultivator and a seemingly innocent demon with a very different idea of "sleeping together?" It sounded like a recipe for comedic gold and fluffy romance, and I was eager to dive in. It's a short story, which I appreciate, as I don't always have time for long commitments.

What Works Well

The core of the story lies in its central misunderstanding, and I found it genuinely funny. The author does a great job of playing with the characters' differing interpretations of the phrase "sleep with me." The demon's innocence is endearing, and the cultivator's initial aloofness, which slowly melts into something more, is well-executed. The twist regarding the demon's true form as a quilt was a delightful surprise and added another layer of humor to the story. The writing style itself is also commendable; it's described as flowy and beautiful, making the story easy to get lost in. The dynamic between the characters really shines, and the way the cultivator changes after realizing his feelings is charming.

Areas of Concern

While the story is generally well-received, I noticed that some readers had issues with the ending. It seems the cultivator tricks the demon into a contract, leading to a non-consensual encounter that some felt crossed a line. This raises serious concerns about the portrayal of consent within the narrative. While some readers find the cultivator's actions "cunning" in a playful way, others view them as deeply problematic and even triggering.

Final Verdict

"I Want to Sleep With You" is a short and generally cute read that hinges on a humorous misunderstanding. However, the ending's handling of consent is a significant issue that detracts from the overall enjoyment. If you're comfortable with potentially problematic themes, the story offers a lighthearted and fluffy experience up to a certain point. However, for those sensitive to issues of consent, it might be best to proceed with caution or skip this one altogether. Ultimately, my enjoyment was dampened by the ending, making it difficult to fully recommend despite its initial charm.