I Took in a Peerless Sword Immortal in an Abandoned Residential Building Novel Review

My Thoughts on I Took in a Peerless Sword Immortal in an Abandoned Residential Building

This web novel had me hooked initially with its intriguing premise. A broke MC with a terminal illness suddenly gets a system that lets him rent out rooms to beings from other worlds? Sign me up! It's a fun twist on the typical urban cultivation setting.

First Impressions

The first few chapters were definitely strong. I enjoyed the setup: the MC's relationship with his childhood friend, his struggles, and the sudden appearance of the tenant system. The idea that his tenants could be anything – cultivators, ghosts, even beings from sci-fi worlds – had me excited about the potential for diverse and interesting storylines. The initial slice-of-life elements were also charming.

What Works Well

The tenant system itself is a major highlight. It's not just a simple power-up; it opens the door to a wide range of possibilities. I also appreciated the relatively overpowered MC in the modern world setting, which allows for some fun and lighthearted action sequences. The characters, with their individual quirks, add to the overall enjoyment, and the translation quality is definitely above average, making it easy to get immersed in the story.

Areas of Concern

However, as the story progresses, some issues start to surface. The pacing can feel uneven. While some enjoy the slice-of-life aspects, others find the focus on the MC's relationship with his childhood friend repetitive and, at times, boring. There's a sense that her character becomes a filler, overshadowing other potentially more interesting heroines.

Furthermore, the MC's actions and motivations become questionable. While he's supposedly devoted to his childhood sweetheart, his interactions with other female characters can come across as manipulative and disingenuous. He flirts and jokes with them while maintaining that his girlfriend is the only one for him, creating a sense of emotional dishonesty. The lack of a real sense of danger, even as the world faces increasing threats, also detracts from the overall experience. The MC spends too much time on slice-of-life activities and not enough time addressing the more serious issues at hand.

Final Verdict

"I Took in a Peerless Sword Immortal in an Abandoned Residential Building" has a lot of potential, and the initial chapters are genuinely enjoyable. However, the pacing issues, repetitive character interactions, and the MC's questionable choices ultimately hold it back. It's a fun read if you're looking for a lighthearted power fantasy with a unique system, but be prepared for some frustrating elements along the way.