He Was Shining With The Stars
By salted egg yolk, 咸蛋黄
Description
After one night sleeping with him, she found he was her father’s sworn brother. She tried to hide herself from him and meant to bury these filthy pasts deep in her heart, but ultimately failed to escape from the beautiful memories. She loved him so much and so blindly that troubles found their way to her. He disappeared, loved and married another woman. This regretless love fraud tortured her, so much so that he finally turned into the sharpest thorn in her heart. She had love, and pain, but lost. As long as she closed her eyes, the very tender look that he had when doting on her to the utmost came to her mind…
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- yunqi
- Original Language
- chinese
- Type
- Web Novel
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My Thoughts on He Was Shining With The Stars
"He Was Shining With The Stars" promised a compelling story of romance and perhaps even a touch of revenge, but after diving in, I found myself with mixed feelings. The premise certainly has potential, but the execution left me wanting more.
First Impressions
The initial chapters drew me in with the promise of a blossoming romance and the intrigue of an older love interest. I was eager to see how the female protagonist would navigate the complexities of such a relationship, especially given the 'abusive characters' tag, which hinted at potential conflict and drama.
What Works Well
The slice-of-life elements are definitely a strong point. The author paints a vivid picture of the characters' daily lives, making them feel relatable, at least initially. I also appreciated the focus on the female protagonist. The story is told through her eyes, allowing us to experience her emotions and struggles firsthand.
Areas of Concern
Unfortunately, my enthusiasm waned as the story progressed. I found myself struggling with the portrayal of the female lead. She comes across as rather passive, and I was hoping to see her develop more agency as the narrative unfolded. The 'abusive characters' tag also raises concerns. While conflict is essential for a good story, it's crucial that it's handled with sensitivity and nuance. I'm not entirely convinced that this novel strikes the right balance just yet. The pacing also felt a little uneven at times, with certain plot points feeling rushed while others dragged on.
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Final Verdict
"He Was Shining With The Stars" has the foundation for a captivating romance, but it needs some refinement. The character development of the female lead is crucial, and the handling of the abusive elements needs careful consideration. While the slice-of-life aspects and the focus on the protagonist are strengths, the uneven pacing and questionable plot decisions ultimately hold it back. I'm cautiously optimistic that the story will improve as it progresses, but for now, I'm on the fence.
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