Endless M*rder

My Thoughts on Endless M*rder

First Impressions

Okay, "Endless M*rder" is definitely a quick and dirty read. I went in knowing it was a one-shot, so my expectations were appropriately tempered. The premise itself is intriguing: a protagonist waking up next to his father's dead body, only to forget the entire event due to some mysterious illness. It's the kind of setup that immediately hooks you, promising a dark and twisted mystery.

What Works Well

The biggest strength of this story is its brevity. It doesn't overstay its welcome. The author gets straight to the point, delivering the core concept without unnecessary fluff. I appreciated the fast pace, especially considering the potentially repetitive nature of the plot. The author also managed to create a palpable sense of unease. The protagonist's confusion and the cyclical nature of the tragedy definitely contribute to an unsettling atmosphere. If you're looking for a quick dose of dark mystery, this might just scratch that itch.

Areas of Concern

Honestly, the rapid-fire delivery also contributes to the story's weaknesses. The plot relies heavily on shock value and the ending is a bit too abrupt. I felt like the core concept could have been explored in greater depth, maybe with more character development to really sell the emotional impact. I think that, while the illness is a great plot device, it also felt a little hand-wavy, as it is never explained.

Final Verdict

"Endless M*rder" is a flawed but ultimately intriguing one-shot. It's a quick read with a dark premise and a twisty plot. While it could benefit from more depth and character development, its brevity and unsettling atmosphere make it a worthwhile experience for those seeking a quick dose of mystery and tragedy. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars. It's a fun, albeit imperfect, experiment in dark fiction.