Double Kill

My Thoughts on Double Kill

"Double Kill" is a web novel that dives into the world of e-sports, blending it with shounen ai romance and a healthy dose of comedy. As someone who enjoys both gaming narratives and character-driven stories, I was eager to see how this one would play out. While I found some aspects of it enjoyable, I also encountered a few stumbling blocks along the way.

First Impressions

The initial chapters introduce us to the dynamic between Feng Can, the young and somewhat brash ADC, and his cold, older team captain. I found Feng Can's initial immaturity relatable, as he's clearly a talented player who still needs to learn the ropes of teamwork and professionalism. The setup has a lot of potential, especially with the promise of character growth and a developing romance.

What Works Well

The novel shines in its portrayal of the e-sports environment. I enjoyed the descriptions of the games, the strategies, and the pressures of competitive gaming. The author does a good job of illustrating Feng Can's evolution as a player. He starts as a self-centered individualist and gradually learns to cooperate with his team, adapt his play style, and respect his opponents. This character development, though a bit rocky at times, is one of the strongest aspects of the story. The humor is also well-placed and provides a nice counterbalance to the more serious moments.

Areas of Concern

One aspect of the novel that gave me pause was the development of the romantic relationship. I found the initial interactions between Feng Can and his team captain somewhat problematic, specifically regarding consent. It made it difficult for me to fully invest in their romance, even as their relationship evolved. Also, the ML's coldness made it difficult to believe that he warmed up to the gong.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Double Kill" is a mixed bag. The e-sports elements and character development are well-executed, offering an engaging reading experience. However, the problematic elements in the romance and the initial character interactions detract from the overall enjoyment. If you're willing to overlook these issues, you might find "Double Kill" to be a worthwhile read, especially if you're a fan of e-sports and shounen ai. For me, it lands at around a 3/5.