Don’t be So Proud Novel Review

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By sui hou zhu, 随侯珠

4.2

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chineseWeb Novel

Genres

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comedy gender bender romance school life supernatural

Chapters

65 chapters

Started

2014

Description

Chatting in the dormitory at night, roommates wonder how much pain Aunt Flow brings. Mr. Perfect He Zhi Zhou has never bothered joining in on these petty talks for amusement. That is, until he became a woman and laid in bed with a white-cast complexion… Chatting in the female dormitory at night, roommates sighed over the current pairings in the school of engineering, Shen Xi was a little curious that the problem with these topics is that there was no way to test them. Until she became a male engineering student and a bar of soap dropped in front of her…

Publication Information

Original Publisher: huashan literature and art publishing house
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

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My Thoughts on Don’t be So Proud

"Don't be So Proud" is a fun, fluffy read that I found myself enjoying despite some of its flaws. It’s a gender-bender romance with a touch of the supernatural, set against the backdrop of school life, and it definitely delivers on the cute and comedic aspects.

First Impressions

The initial chapters can be a bit overwhelming, throwing a bunch of characters at you at once. It took me a little while to sort everyone out, but once I did, the story flowed much more smoothly. The body swap premise is executed well, leading to plenty of hilarious situations as the leads navigate life in each other's shoes.

What Works Well

The core of the story, the relationship between the leads after the body swap, is where it really shines. I loved watching them learn about each other and compromise as they dealt with the consequences of their situation. The female lead, while a bit impulsive, is ultimately lovable and apologetic for her mistakes. The male lead, initially cold and aloof, gradually softens as he realizes his feelings for her. I appreciated that their romance developed at a believable pace, and I found their dynamic genuinely engaging. The author does a good job of making their interactions feel natural, even amidst the supernatural circumstances.

Areas of Concern

While I enjoyed the overall story, I can see why some readers might find certain aspects frustrating. The female lead can be a bit selfish at times, acting without considering the consequences for the male lead when she's in his body. This can lead to some cringeworthy moments where she jeopardizes his reputation. Additionally, the second male lead and his ambiguous relationship with the female lead were a bit of a drag for me. I found myself wanting her to move on already.

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Final Verdict

Overall, "Don't be So Proud" is a lighthearted and enjoyable read if you're looking for a fluffy romance with a unique twist. While the female lead's occasional selfishness and the second male lead's arc can be frustrating, the engaging dynamic between the main couple and the comedic situations arising from the body swap make it a worthwhile read. I'd recommend it if you're in the mood for something cute and not too serious.