Doing It Over Again Novel Review

My Thoughts on Doing It Over Again

"Doing It Over Again" promised a comforting blend of second chances, school life, and a touch of romance. After diving in, I found a story with a lot of heart, though it wasn't without its imperfections.

First Impressions

The premise is immediately appealing: a protagonist reborn with a second chance to chase his dreams and right past regrets. I was drawn in by the promise of a light, slice-of-life story with a hint of wish fulfillment. The initial chapters delivered on this, establishing a calm and intelligent MC ready to make the most of his new opportunity, aided by a helpful "golden finger" – his enhanced memory.

What Works Well

The slow-burn romance is a definite highlight. It's a refreshing change of pace from more intense stories, focusing on a sweet, almost bromance-like connection that gradually blossoms into something more. I particularly enjoyed the dynamic between the MC and the ML, with the ML's awkwardness and genuine affection adding a layer of charm to the story. The author painted a picture of a healthy and realistic relationship, free from excessive cheesiness. The story is also easy to read and is accessible to most readers.

Areas of Concern

While the slice-of-life elements were generally enjoyable, I felt that some aspects of the story were underdeveloped. Several characters and plot points seemed to be introduced and then abruptly dropped, leaving me wanting more. The pacing could be uneven, with some events feeling rushed while others dragged on. I also found some of the later plot developments, particularly the international competition arc, to be somewhat out of place and less engaging than the earlier parts of the story. I can also see how the MC could be seen as a Gary Stu type character.

Final Verdict

"Doing It Over Again" is an enjoyable read if you're looking for a light, feel-good story with a focus on personal growth and slow-burn romance. It's not without its flaws, but the strengths of the characters and the overall heartwarming tone make it a worthwhile experience. I'd recommend it with the caveat that some plot points and character arcs could have been more fully developed.