Cute Beast Store No. 138 Novel Review

My Thoughts on Cute Beast Store No. 138

After diving into "Cute Beast Store No. 138," I've got some mixed feelings. The premise, a blend of comedy, fantasy, and yaoi with adorable beasts, initially pulled me in. However, the execution left me a bit bewildered at times.

First Impressions

The initial draw is definitely the "cute" factor and the promise of a lighthearted story. The idea of a protagonist who can communicate with animals, especially in a world where they're mistreated, is appealing. The transmigrated MC with his unique ability and the establishment of a shelter for abandoned beasts sets the stage for something heartwarming.

What Works Well

When the story shines, it really shines. The interactions between the MC and the beasts are undoubtedly the highlight. Many readers have praised these moments as being incredibly fluffy and endearing. I also enjoyed the MC's personality; he's described as cunning and not afraid to stand up for himself and the animals, which makes for some satisfying face-slapping moments against unscrupulous characters. The world-building, while flawed, presents an interesting dynamic between humans and beasts.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the novel stumbles quite a bit. The most glaring issue, and one that several readers have pointed out, is the quality of the translation. It's often described as feeling like MTL (machine translation), with awkward phrasing and sentences that don't quite make sense. This can lead to confusion and frustration, making it difficult to follow the plot.

The plot itself also seems to suffer from coherence issues. The story jumps around, introducing plot points that feel disconnected or unresolved. The pacing can be erratic, and some elements, like the MC's ability to travel back to a sentient Earth, feel out of place and poorly explained.

Final Verdict

"Cute Beast Store No. 138" has potential, but it's hampered by significant flaws. If you're willing to overlook the translation issues and plot inconsistencies, you might find some enjoyment in the fluffy beast interactions and the MC's personality. However, be aware of the potential triggers and the lack of coherence before diving in. Overall, I'd say it's a 3/5 - a story with a charming core buried beneath layers of issues.