Constant Gaze

My Thoughts on Constant Gaze

"Constant Gaze" is a short and sweet dive into a modern romance with a significant age gap. It's a quick read, perfect for when you want something light but potentially a little… intense. I went in expecting a fluffy romance, and while there were definitely some heartwarming moments, I also found myself pausing to consider the dynamics at play.

First Impressions

The premise immediately grabbed my attention: a carefree protagonist falling for an older love interest. I was curious to see how the author would navigate this dynamic, especially with the "yaoi" tag promising a male/male relationship. The "slice of life" aspect also appealed to me, as I enjoy stories that focus on the everyday moments that build relationships.

What Works Well

The characters are definitely a strong point. The protagonist's carefree nature is endearing, and the older love interest's quiet determination is equally compelling. I appreciated how the story explores the budding feelings between them, even if those feelings are a little… complicated at times. The short story format allows for a focused narrative, and the author does a good job of creating a believable connection despite the limited page count. The modern-day setting also helps to ground the story and make it relatable.

Areas of Concern

I did find myself wishing for a bit more clarity in certain areas. The feelings between the characters, particularly early on, felt somewhat ambiguous. While the "determined protagonist" tag definitely applies, I think the male lead's feelings could have been fleshed out more. And, without giving too much away, I felt like the ending hinted at a slightly darker side to the relationship, which might not be for everyone. The "yandere" tag may apply, so it's something to keep in mind if that's not your thing.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Constant Gaze" is an interesting and engaging read. While it may leave you with some questions and a slightly unsettling feeling, it's a unique take on the age-gap romance trope. If you're looking for a short, thought-provoking story with well-developed characters, this might be worth checking out. I'd give it a solid 3.75/5.