Become a Black Screen in a Novel

My Thoughts on Become a Black Screen in a Novel

"Become a Black Screen in a Novel" presents a fascinating premise: a protagonist entering a novel world with a clear goal of maximizing power, but the execution, at least in the early chapters, feels uneven. While the core idea has potential, my experience was a bit of a mixed bag.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued by the concept of a character creation system and the MC's willingness to sacrifice for future power. However, the early chapters felt somewhat disorienting. The lack of clear explanations regarding the "Character Creation System" and the MC's motivations made it hard to fully invest in the story. It felt like I was missing crucial context, struggling to piece together the rules of this world.

What Works Well

The protagonist's pragmatic and, dare I say, Machiavellian personality does shine through. His willingness to make sacrifices to achieve his goals is compelling, and I can see the appeal for readers who enjoy morally gray characters. The idea of the MC manipulating the system to gain power is an interesting take on the "isekai" trope. The author's unique take on concepts and their connection to the chapter's events is also somewhat interesting.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the narrative clarity is a significant issue. The inconsistent perspective and the lack of in-depth explanations about the power system and character motivations made it difficult to fully understand what was happening and why. The protagonist's seemingly detached attitude towards the novel world also created a disconnect. It's hard to root for someone who appears to actively dislike the story they're in. It's also important to note that the translation quality may impact the reading experience, as some have noted challenges with understanding the nuances of the story.

Final Verdict

"Become a Black Screen in a Novel" has a compelling premise and a charismatic protagonist, but the initial execution suffers from a lack of clarity and inconsistent narrative perspective. While the MC's pragmatic nature is appealing, the story needs to provide a stronger foundation for readers to fully invest in his journey. I'm giving it a tentative 3/5. The potential is there, but it needs refinement to truly shine.