After Our Engagement Was Called Off, We Got Married, and We’re Happier Than I Could Have Ever Imagined

My Thoughts on After Our Engagement Was Called Off, We Got Married, and We’re Happier Than I Could Have Ever Imagined

"After Our Engagement Was Called Off, We Got Married, and We’re Happier Than I Could Have Ever Imagined" – what a mouthful of a title! I went into this novel hoping for a heartwarming story about second chances, and while the core concept delivered, the execution left something to be desired.

First Impressions

The premise is undeniably charming. Two individuals, jilted on the same day, find solace in each other and decide to build a life together. It's a classic setup for a sweet romance, and I was eager to dive in. The "happier than I could have ever imagined" part of the title really hooked me.

What Works Well

The strength of this story lies in its potential for heartwarming couple growth. The idea of watching a relationship blossom from shared disappointment into a loving family, complete with children, is genuinely appealing. I found myself rooting for the couple, wanting to see them succeed where their previous relationships failed. The backdrop of the crumbling relationship of the prince and lady adds a nice touch of schadenfreude, highlighting the success of the main couple's unconventional union.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the translation quality significantly hampered my enjoyment. The text often felt clunky and difficult to parse, making it hard to fully immerse myself in the story. I encountered confusing phrasing and awkward word choices that constantly pulled me out of the narrative. Details such as inconsistent names and odd terminology choices further contributed to the problem. While the underlying story is sweet, the poor translation makes it a struggle to truly appreciate. If you're considering reading this, I'd strongly recommend seeking out a different translation or waiting for a more polished version.

Final Verdict

"After Our Engagement Was Called Off..." presents a delightful concept marred by translation issues. While the promise of a heartwarming story is there, the execution needs improvement. I'm giving it a tentative 2.5/5. With a better translation, this could easily be a 4-star read. As it stands, proceed with caution.