After Becoming the Master, I Ended up With My Disciple Novel Review
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By 柚子幼稚
2024
Description
I transmigrated into a high-risk profession in the cultivation world—master. To protect myself, I decided to disguise myself as an old man so that my disciple wouldn’t be interested in me. But why does my disciple still look at me with those strange eyes? Wait, do you have a father complex? Even after I’ve transformed like this, you still won’t let me go! Later, I found out that my disciple is a descendant of the true dragon, and my disguise doesn’t work on him at all! So, what I see as paternal affection, does he see as flirting? ‘…’ Wait, if he’s a dragon, doesn’t that mean he has… two…? That’s terrifying. To protect myself, I decisively abandoned my disciple and fled.
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- chinese
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- Web Novel
After Becoming the Master, I Ended up With My Disciple Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on After Becoming the Master, I Ended up With My Disciple
This novel, "After Becoming the Master, I Ended up With My Disciple," certainly offers a quick and engaging read, diving headfirst into a world of martial arts, cultivation, and a master-disciple relationship with a distinctly yaoi twist. The premise itself – a transmigrated soul becoming the object of a dragon's affection – is intriguing enough to pique interest.
First Impressions
From the start, I was drawn in by the summary. The trope of a "foolish" transmigrator stumbling into a powerful position is always entertaining. The promise of a beautiful master paired with a devoted, dragon-blooded disciple had me expecting a story filled with humor and heart.
What Works Well
The novel's greatest strength is its pacing. It wastes no time setting up the core relationship and propelling the plot forward. If you're looking for a light and fluffy read that you can devour in a single sitting, this might just be it. The dynamic between the master and disciple is definitely a highlight, with the disciple's devotion and the master's initial unawareness creating some amusing situations. The author does a good job of establishing the core romance quickly, making it a satisfying read for those who enjoy a fast-paced love story.
Areas of Concern
While the rapid pacing is a plus for some, it also leads to a feeling of incompleteness. The story feels somewhat rushed, as if important details and plot points were glossed over. I felt like the world-building could have been more fleshed out, and the characters, while charming, could have benefited from more depth. Due to the short nature of the story, certain elements felt underdeveloped, leaving me wanting more. It almost felt like a draft for a longer, more detailed novel.
Final Verdict
"After Becoming the Master, I Ended up With My Disciple" is a fun and quick read that excels in its fast-paced romance. While the brevity of the story leads to some underdeveloped aspects, the core relationship and intriguing premise make it an enjoyable experience. If you're looking for a lighthearted yaoi story with a devoted dragon disciple, this might be worth checking out. Just be prepared for a read that's more of a sprint than a marathon. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars.
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