About Your Pride and My Prejudice

My Thoughts on About Your Pride and My Prejudice

"About Your Pride and My Prejudice" is a web novel that certainly sparked a lot of varied opinions, and after diving in, I can see why. It's a story steeped in drama, romance, and a touch of mystery, all set against a backdrop that vaguely resembles the world of Austen's "Pride and Prejudice." However, it takes a sharp turn into its own unique territory, for better or worse.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the promise of a slow-burn romance and the European-esque setting. The writing style, as many have pointed out, is undeniably beautiful, and the translator seems to have done a fantastic job capturing the author's elegant prose. There's a certain charm to the way the story unfolds, focusing on the inner thoughts and feelings of the protagonist, Melissa.

What Works Well

The character depth is where this novel shines. The author really delves into the motivations and insecurities of the main characters. I appreciated the realistic portrayal of their flaws and the way their pride and prejudice created misunderstandings. The side stories, especially Viola's, were also a welcome addition, often providing a lighter contrast to the main plot. Despite some of the darker themes, many find the story oddly comforting, like a quiet, character-driven drama.

Areas of Concern

However, my enjoyment was hampered by a few significant issues. Melissa's infatuation with Alan felt, at times, illogical and overly obsessive. Her actions surrounding Tobias, a character who deserves so much better, were frustrating to witness. I also found the transmigration aspect to be largely unnecessary, adding little to the plot and sometimes creating inconsistencies in the character's behavior. It felt like a tacked-on element rather than an integral part of the story. The pacing can be incredibly slow, which may deter some readers.

Final Verdict

"About Your Pride and My Prejudice" is a novel with definite strengths, particularly in its character development and writing style. However, the slow pace, questionable character choices, and unnecessary transmigration element hold it back. If you're a fan of slow-burn romances with flawed characters and are willing to overlook some problematic plot points, you might find something to enjoy here. However, be prepared for a potentially frustrating and emotionally charged read. Ultimately, I'd give it a cautious recommendation, with the caveat that it may not be for everyone.