You Are Not In Exile, You Are Clearly Traveling! Novel Review
WE DO NOT HOST ANY CHAPTERS OR DOWNLOADS FOR THIS NOVEL.
By chen yuyan
170
2023
Description
【Exile + Farming + Spatial + System + Opening Up + No CP】 Just as she crossed over, she was tragically exiled, but fortunately, she had a spatial dimension at her disposal. Rob the house? Rob the air instead. Chen Xue immediately emptied out the Chen Family Estate, from the floor to the bed curtains, even the garden and lake were not spared. She even moved away the several thousand kilograms of food that her enemies had planted to frame her. When the enemies came to ransack the house. The enemy was dumbfounded, “Where are the things? The several thousand kilograms of supplies I secretly placed?” One of the household servants said, “Sir, apart from rat droppings, there’s nothing in the Chen Family residence.” A colleague remarked, “Sir Chen is so honest, there’s not a grain of food in the house, and even the family sleeps on the floor.” Chen Xue said, “My family is really poor, there’s not even a single grain of rice in the jar, we’re so poor we can’t even afford to cook.” So, everyone knew that there was a Mr. Chen in the capital who was struggling and penniless. Chen Xue’s Father: “Whoever says my family is struggling and penniless, I’ll take issue with them!” Chen Xue’s Mother: “It was our daughter who said it.” Chen Xue’s Father: “Ahem, well then, that’s okay.” Chen Xue said that exile was very difficult, not only enduring the wind, sun, rain, but also lacking sufficient food… The convicts and constables sneered, “Go on, we are the ones exiled, you’re practically on vacation.” Among the exiled group, the Chen family lay in the carriage, drinking tea, eating dried fruits, playing Go, leisurely cultivating vegetables in the spatial dimension, and when craving, exchanging snacks like spicy strips from the system, living quite contentedly.
Tags
Click any tag to find similar novels in the library
Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- qidian
- Original Language
- chinese
- Type
- Web Novel
You Are Not In Exile, You Are Clearly Traveling! Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on You Are Not In Exile, You Are Clearly Traveling!
This web novel promises a cozy blend of genres, and after diving in, I can see why it's captured the attention of some readers. The premise is certainly intriguing: a family exiled but far from destitute, embarking on a journey that feels more like a well-supplied vacation. However, the execution has some definite highs and lows that I want to delve into.
First Impressions
The initial chapters had me hooked. The idea of a family making the most of a bad situation, turning exile into an adventure, is inherently appealing. I was particularly drawn to the promise of "doting parents" and "familial love," which seemed to be a central theme early on. The female protagonist also brings a refreshing perspective to the historical fantasy genre.
What Works Well
The "cheats" and "magical space" elements definitely add a fun layer to the story. The family's resourcefulness in utilizing their advantages makes for some entertaining scenarios, especially the farming aspect. The slice-of-life elements, combined with the overarching plot of schemes and conspiracies, create a nice balance that keeps the story engaging.
Areas of Concern
As I progressed, I noticed a few issues that detracted from my overall enjoyment. While the early chapters establish a strong sense of family unity and caring for their servants, this seemed to shift later in the story. The ending, in particular, felt rushed and out of character. The family's sudden decision to abandon their loyal servants in favor of escaping felt jarring and inconsistent with their previous actions. It made the ending feel forced and unsatisfying.
Also, the repeated "face-slapping" scenarios might become tiresome for some readers. While satisfying initially, the constant need to put others in their place can become repetitive and detract from the overall narrative.
Click "Reveal" to show spoiler content
Final Verdict
"You Are Not In Exile, You Are Clearly Traveling!" has a lot of potential. The initial premise is engaging, the family dynamics are heartwarming, and the blend of genres creates a unique reading experience. However, the rushed ending and inconsistencies in character behavior ultimately hold it back. If you're looking for a lighthearted read with a strong focus on family and don't mind a potentially unsatisfying conclusion, this might be worth checking out. However, be prepared for some narrative bumps along the way.
