We’ve Never Been Lovers, So You Must Be Mistaken! My Childhood Friend Burst Out Laughing When I Told Him After Returning from the Expedition

My Thoughts on We’ve Never Been Lovers, So You Must Be Mistaken! My Childhood Friend Burst Out Laughing When I Told Him After Returning from the Expedition

This title is a mouthful, isn't it? "We’ve Never Been Lovers, So You Must Be Mistaken! My Childhood Friend Burst Out Laughing When I Told Him After Returning from the Expedition" promises a comedic and potentially heartwarming story, and for the most part, it delivers. As a completed one-shot, it offers a quick dip into a medieval-esque world filled with misunderstandings, unrequited love, and the enduring bond of childhood friendship.

First Impressions

My initial reaction was one of cautious optimism. The premise is intriguing: a female protagonist returns from an expedition, confesses feelings to her childhood friend, and… well, the title tells you the rest. I was expecting a lighthearted read with a healthy dose of awkwardness and perhaps a touch of romance. The tags (comedy, fantasy, romance, slice of life) seemed to align with that expectation.

What Works Well

The story's strength lies in its comedic timing and the dynamic between the two main characters. The author does a good job of portraying the awkwardness and vulnerability of confessing feelings, especially when those feelings are met with unexpected laughter. The slice-of-life aspects are also well-executed, giving a glimpse into their everyday lives and highlighting the depth of their friendship. It definitely kept me entertained from start to finish. The author made good use of medieval themes and implemented them into the story.

Areas of Concern

The biggest drawback, in my opinion, is its brevity. As a one-shot, the story feels somewhat rushed. I would have loved to see the characters and their relationship explored in more detail, especially the aftermath of the confession. The ending felt a bit abrupt, leaving me wanting more. It's a fun read, but not necessarily a memorable one.

Final Verdict

"We’ve Never Been Lovers, So You Must Be Mistaken! My Childhood Friend Burst Out Laughing When I Told Him After Returning from the Expedition" is a decent, lighthearted read, perfect for a quick escape. While it’s not a story that will stick with me for a long time, I enjoyed the time I spent reading it. If you're looking for a short and sweet story with a touch of comedy and romance, this might be worth checking out. However, if you prefer longer, more fleshed-out narratives, you might find it lacking.