The Villain Will Become Stupid If He Doesn’t Pamper Me

My Thoughts on The Villain Will Become Stupid If He Doesn’t Pamper Me

This novel is quite a ride, and honestly, I'm still trying to figure out exactly how I feel about it. "The Villain Will Become Stupid If He Doesn’t Pamper Me" promises comedy and fluff, and it certainly delivers on those fronts, but it's also a bit of a chaotic mess.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued by the premise: a reborn ML with a system forcing him to dote on a transmigrated MC. It sounded like a recipe for some hilarious scenarios. However, like some readers, I found the initial chapters a bit confusing. There's a lot thrown at you at once, and it takes a little while to sort out who's who and what's going on. The summary could definitely use some clarification to prepare readers for the zaniness to come.

What Works Well

When this story works, it really works. The interactions between the ML and MC are often hilarious and heartwarming. The ML's character, in particular, is a breath of fresh air. He's not your typical cold CEO; he's often childish and silly, which makes his devotion to the MC all the more endearing. The MC, despite initial appearances, isn't just a clueless pushover. He's a former businessman with hidden depths, and it's fun to watch him navigate this new, absurd world. The comedy is definitely a strong point; I found myself laughing out loud at several points, especially at the ML's antics and the increasingly bizarre situations they find themselves in. The plot also has decent twists that keep you guessing.

Areas of Concern

The biggest issue, for me, is the plot's overall coherence. Like many, I felt that the storyline becomes increasingly convoluted as the story progresses. Things start to feel forced, and some of the humor falls flat. The characters, at times, seem to lose their common sense, and the plot can feel like a string of random events rather than a cohesive narrative. Also, the translation could be improved.

Final Verdict

"The Villain Will Become Stupid If He Doesn’t Pamper Me" is a flawed but ultimately enjoyable read. If you're looking for a lighthearted, comedic story with a doting ML and a slightly unhinged plot, this might be right up your alley. Just be prepared to suspend your disbelief and embrace the chaos. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars. It's not perfect, but it's definitely good for a laugh.