The Sniper Hides Their Eyes

My Thoughts on The Sniper Hides Their Eyes

The Sniper Hides Their Eyes had me hooked with its intriguing premise: a blind protagonist navigating a fantasy world and developing unique eye-based abilities. The initial concept promised a fresh take on the familiar fantasy tropes, and I dove in eager to see how it would unfold.

First Impressions

The early chapters were promising. I appreciated the author's attempt to portray the protagonist's perspective as a newly sighted individual. There's a rawness and vulnerability that I found compelling, and the academy setting felt like a natural fit for the story's progression. I was ready for a journey of growth, challenges, and the exploration of her unique abilities.

What Works Well

The initial concept of a blind character developing unique sniping abilities through awakened eyesight is undeniably interesting. The author clearly has a creative flair, and the idea of blending different fantasy elements could have been a strength.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the execution falters. The pacing feels incredibly rushed, and the world-building suffers as a result. The story throws a multitude of fantasy elements into the mix without adequately developing them, which left me feeling disoriented. Instead of a focused narrative, it feels like a collection of ideas crammed together.

The protagonist's power progression is also a significant issue. She gains abilities and overcomes challenges at an alarming rate, diminishing any sense of tension or genuine threat. I found myself losing interest as she effortlessly surpassed every obstacle, making her feel less relatable and more like a plot device. The story becomes less about her journey and more about showcasing her ever-increasing power.

Final Verdict

The Sniper Hides Their Eyes has a captivating core concept, but the rushed pacing, underdeveloped world-building, and excessive power progression ultimately undermine its potential. While the initial chapters held promise, the story quickly devolves into a power fantasy that lacks depth and meaningful conflict. I was left disappointed by the missed opportunities and the unrealized potential of the premise.