Immortal Fate Of Longevity: Starting From Taking Care of Fellow Daoist Wife

My Thoughts on Immortal Fate Of Longevity: Starting From Taking Care of Fellow Daoist Wife

This novel is definitely a wild ride, and not always in a good way. "Immortal Fate Of Longevity: Starting From Taking Care of Fellow Daoist Wife" promises a unique xianxia experience, and it delivers...sort of. It’s not your typical cultivation story, and that’s both its strength and its weakness.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued by the premise. A protagonist who isn't necessarily heroic, but rather a bit petty and self-serving, trying to build up his family in a cultivation world? That's a refreshing change from the usual goody-two-shoes MC. The early chapters focusing on city-building and accumulating wealth were engaging, and I found myself enjoying the slower pace.

What Works Well

The world-building is a standout. It's not generic, which is high praise in the often-formulaic xianxia genre. The MC, Xia Changge, is more of an adult than many protagonists I've encountered, making his choices and actions feel more believable, even when questionable. The humor is also a plus, making the story a fun, if sometimes guilty, pleasure. The progress of his cultivation is slow at first, but that might be a good thing if you're looking for a more relaxed reading experience.

Areas of Concern

However, the novel stumbles in several areas. The pacing becomes erratic, with random arcs appearing and a lack of tension. The romance, or lack thereof, is a significant issue. The harem aspect escalates rapidly, with dozens of women joining the MC's life with little to no development. This leads to a feeling of shallowness, especially when some of the relationships become… morally ambiguous, to say the least.

Final Verdict

"Immortal Fate Of Longevity" is a mixed bag. It has moments of brilliance with its unique world-building and flawed protagonist, but it's ultimately dragged down by its pacing issues, shallow romance, and questionable plot developments. I'd recommend reading the first part for its interesting premise and slow-growth elements, but be prepared to drop it if it starts to feel repetitive or the morally ambiguous elements become too much to handle. It's an okay novel, but not one I can wholeheartedly recommend.