I Will Make You a King as a Possessor

My Thoughts on I Will Make You a King as a Possessor

"I Will Make You a King as a Possessor" plunges you into a world of magic academies, cunning protagonists, and high-stakes political maneuvering. The premise alone—a protagonist tasked with making someone a king or facing death—immediately grabbed my attention. It promised a blend of fantasy and strategy, and for the most part, it delivered.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued by the Hunter/Gate world origin and the system that carries over, even without the protagonist's original abilities. The early chapters set a good foundation, introducing the academy setting and the undercurrent of danger. It had me hooked, eager to see how the protagonist, Raymond, would navigate this new world with his unique objective.

What Works Well

Raymond himself is a major draw. He's not your typical overpowered hero. Instead, he relies on his intellect, resourcefulness, and a fair bit of manipulation to survive. I found myself comparing him to Cale Henituse from "Trash of the Count's Family" – a clever, seemingly weak character who uses their wits to overcome challenges. His relationships with the supporting characters are also well-developed. The tsundere fathers of Onyx and Raymond are particularly amusing, and the gradual emotional growth Raymond experiences as he forms genuine connections is a highlight. The villain, Somerset, is also a worthy adversary, being just as cunning and ruthless as Raymond. The battles are not the focus of the story, instead the focus is on the scheming, character relationships, and character development.

Areas of Concern

The translation quality is a definite issue. I noticed mentions of inconsistencies, incorrect pronoun usage, and even repeated sections. The flow is disrupted, and it requires extra effort to decipher the intended meaning. While not a deal-breaker, it's something that needs improvement to fully enjoy the story.

Final Verdict

Despite its flaws, "I Will Make You a King as a Possessor" is an enjoyable read, especially if you appreciate a protagonist who uses their brain over brawn and a plot filled with political intrigue. The translation issues are a hurdle, but the compelling characters and engaging storyline make it worth pushing through. If you're looking for a fantasy novel with a clever MC and a unique premise, this might be right up your alley.