I Was Betrayed by a Childhood Friend I Liked and a Junior Who Loved Me, so I Became Distrustful of Women

My Thoughts on I Was Betrayed by a Childhood Friend I Liked and a Junior Who Loved Me, so I Became Distrustful of Women

This title is a mouthful, isn't it? But the premise definitely grabbed my attention. A story about betrayal, trauma, and the slow rebuilding of trust? Sign me up! After diving in, I have some mixed feelings, though.

First Impressions

The initial chapters hooked me with the promise of exploring the MC's emotional fallout. The setup, with a childhood friend's confusing rejection and a junior's questionable romantic choices, felt like a solid foundation for exploring themes of trust and relationships. I was ready for some angst!

What Works Well

I appreciate the exploration of the MC's trauma stemming from his past, particularly regarding his mother. It adds a layer of depth to his distrustful nature, making it feel somewhat justified, even if his reactions sometimes seem extreme. The author does a decent job portraying the lingering effects of past experiences on present relationships. The sister, Yuka, is a standout character. She's funny, proactive, and genuinely seems to care about the MC's well-being, providing a welcome contrast to the… more complicated female characters. I see potential in the evolving relationships with the other female characters, even if it's a slow burn.

Areas of Concern

My main issue lies with the pacing and the handling of the "betrayals." At times, the story feels drawn out, with the MC wallowing in his victim complex for extended periods. The misunderstandings, which drive much of the conflict, can feel contrived and frustrating. It's hard to fully sympathize with the MC when he refuses to communicate or address the issues head-on. This leads to a sense of stagnation, where the same problems are rehashed repeatedly. Also, the childhood friend's actions seem selfish, while the junior's behavior is questionable. It's a bit of a mess, and the MC's reactions can be overblown.

Final Verdict

"I Was Betrayed by a Childhood Friend I Liked and a Junior Who Loved Me, so I Became Distrustful of Women" has the potential to be a compelling exploration of trauma and trust. However, the slow pacing, frustrating misunderstandings, and somewhat unlikeable characters hold it back. While I appreciate the exploration of the MC's past and the presence of a supportive sister character, I hope the author addresses the pacing issues and develops the female characters beyond their initial archetypes. It's a story with promise, but it needs some refinement to truly shine.