I Stopped Working Because I Was Expelled From the Hero’s Party After They Denounced Me as a Coward

My Thoughts on I Stopped Working Because I Was Expelled From the Hero’s Party After They Denounced Me as a Coward

This title definitely grabbed my attention, promising a tale of betrayal and a satisfying journey of self-discovery. While the initial premise held promise, "I Stopped Working..." ultimately left me feeling a bit conflicted. It's a mixed bag of interesting ideas that unfortunately don't quite coalesce into a consistently enjoyable experience.

First Impressions

The opening chapters definitely hooked me. The idea of a "cowardly" hero, one who wins through cunning and unconventional tactics, felt fresh. The betrayal by his party members, especially after all he'd done for them, seemed like a great springboard for character development and a compelling narrative. I was ready for a tale of growth and perhaps even some well-deserved payback.

What Works Well

I appreciated the unique take on the protagonist. He's not your typical righteous hero; he's pragmatic, a bit of a trickster, and willing to do whatever it takes to win. The training aspects of the story were also enjoyable. The dynamic between the master (the MC) and his disciple, as they develop their skills and bond, was a highlight. The action sequences, when they hit their mark, were satisfying and showcased the MC's unconventional fighting style.

Areas of Concern

However, the execution falters in several key areas. The pacing felt rushed, and the plot often meandered, losing focus on the initial conflict. The biggest issue for me was the MC's inconsistent character and, frankly, baffling decisions regarding his former party members. The speed and ease with which he forgives those who wronged him felt unearned and undermined the emotional impact of the betrayal. I also found the actions of the elf disciple somewhat intrusive, pushing the MC in directions that felt unnatural and out of character. This dynamic made it difficult to fully invest in their relationship.

Final Verdict

"I Stopped Working Because I Was Expelled From the Hero’s Party After They Denounced Me as a Coward" had the potential to be a truly compelling story. The initial premise and the unconventional protagonist offered a refreshing twist on familiar tropes. However, the inconsistent character development, rushed pacing, and questionable plot decisions ultimately hindered my enjoyment. It's a novel with flashes of brilliance, but one that ultimately falls short of its potential. I can only give it a 2.5/5.