I Ended My Engagement With The Woman Who Despised Me

My Thoughts on I Ended My Engagement With The Woman Who Despised Me

This web novel promises a twist on the typical transmigration story, and while it has some intriguing elements, I found myself ultimately feeling a bit conflicted. It's a story of unrequited love, revenge, and a second chance, but the execution feels a little rough around the edges.

First Impressions

The premise is definitely attention-grabbing. Our protagonist, Damian, a die-hard fan of a novel's "least favorite" heroine, Elisia, finds himself reborn as her villainous fiancé. Determined to win her over, he tries to change his ways, but his efforts are met with her continued disdain. The story kicks off when he finally calls off the engagement after she and her family wrong him. The initial chapters hooked me with the promise of a different kind of revenge story.

What Works Well

I appreciate the idea of a protagonist trying to change his fate and the narrative. The early chapters, focusing on Damian's attempts to improve Elisia's life, have some charm. The concept of a fanboy getting a chance to interact with his "oshi" is relatable and offers potential for interesting character dynamics. Also, the translation quality is quite good.

Areas of Concern

However, the execution falters in several areas. Damian's actions and motivations often feel disconnected from the reality of the world he inhabits. For instance, his solutions to the city's problems seem superficial, and his expectations that Elisia will immediately trust him after his past behavior are unrealistic. The characters' actions can be inconsistent, driven more by plot convenience than believable development. Also, the writing quality and world-building are okay, but they are not unique or exceptional.

Final Verdict

"I Ended My Engagement With The Woman Who Despised Me" has an interesting premise and some potential, but the execution needs refinement. The protagonist's motivations can be questionable, and the plot sometimes relies on convenient character actions rather than organic development. If you're looking for a revenge story with a unique twist and are willing to overlook some flaws, this might be worth a try. However, be prepared for some frustration along the way. Overall, I'd give it a cautious 3 out of 5 stars.