I Became a Progenitor Vampire

My Thoughts on I Became a Progenitor Vampire

"I Became a Progenitor Vampire" had me intrigued from the start with its blend of action, adventure, fantasy, and even a touch of sci-fi. The premise of becoming a progenitor vampire in a world with game elements is undeniably appealing. I dove in hoping for a unique power fantasy, and while I found some enjoyment, it wasn't without its drawbacks.

First Impressions

The initial chapters hooked me with the world-building and system setup. The idea of Earth's players joining the world and having to adapt to a realistic social environment was a refreshing take on the genre. The MC's gradual rise to power was also well-executed, laying a solid foundation for what I hoped would be a sprawling epic.

What Works Well

The novel shines in its kingdom-building aspects. I appreciated how the MC exploited existing governmental issues to boost his kingdom's popularity. The story isn't solely focused on one area; the MC juggles multiple organizations like the City of Dawn, the Scarlet Magic Tower, and the Dark Covenant, each with its own unique background and management style. This complexity kept things interesting. The time-skip was also handled surprisingly well, feeling organic rather than forced.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the story stumbles in later arcs. As the MC's power grows and the world starts to shrink, the narrative loses some of its initial charm. The focus shifts from well-crafted world-building to simple power leveling, which detracted from my enjoyment.

Another significant issue I encountered was the heavy-handed nationalism that becomes more prevalent as the story progresses. The anti-democracy sentiments and glorification of dictatorship were difficult to ignore and, at times, made the story unbearable. I also found the constant glorification of the MC, with everyone viewing him as a god, to be grating. It flattened the other characters, reducing them to mere puppets who constantly sought his approval.

Final Verdict

"I Became a Progenitor Vampire" has moments of brilliance, particularly in its early world-building and kingdom management. However, the later shift in focus, coupled with the overwhelming nationalism and one-dimensional character portrayals, ultimately hampered my enjoyment. If you can stomach these issues, there's a decent story to be found, but be warned – it's a bumpy ride. I'd give it a cautious recommendation, perhaps with a suggestion to stop reading around chapter 300 to preserve the better aspects of the story.