I Became a M*rderer in the Academy Novel Review

My Thoughts on I Became a M*rderer in the Academy

"I Became a M*rderer in the Academy" is a web novel that grabbed my attention with its intriguing premise: a protagonist reincarnated as a monster in a world with magic academies, struggling to retain her humanity. It’s a blend of dark fantasy and school life, which is either a recipe for brilliance or disaster. So, how does this one fare?

First Impressions

The initial chapters hooked me. The concept of a protagonist slowly losing their human emotions and grappling with monstrous instincts is compelling. I found myself drawn into the internal conflict of Iria, the main character, as she navigates a world where she must consume others to survive, all while desperately trying to cling to her former self. The setup is fantastic, and the initial mystery surrounding her past life kept me invested.

What Works Well

What I appreciated most about this novel is the protagonist's internal struggle. It's not just about leveling up and becoming overpowered; it's about the ethical dilemmas and the psychological toll of her actions. The author does a good job of portraying Iria's gradual descent into a more twisted, monstrous state, and her desperate attempts to hold onto her sanity. The world-building, while not always the primary focus, has its moments of brilliance. The side characters, even those with limited screen time, often feel surprisingly fleshed out, adding a sense of depth to the world. The academy setting, when it works, provides an interesting backdrop for Iria's internal battles.

Areas of Concern

However, the novel isn't without its flaws. The pacing can feel disjointed at times, as the story oscillates between the dark, gritty reality of Iria's monstrous nature and the more lighthearted, typical academy setting. At times, the academy setting feels excessive and almost like a distraction from the core themes. The plotline can be painfully simple, and at times the dialogue feels childish. The world building and portrayals are not the greatest, with characters being one dimensional and basic archetypes.

Final Verdict

Despite its flaws, "I Became a M*rderer in the Academy" is a hidden gem worth checking out. The protagonist's internal conflict and the exploration of morality in a dark fantasy setting are genuinely captivating. While the pacing and some of the world-building elements could be improved, the novel's strengths outweigh its weaknesses. I’d give it a solid 4 out of 5 stars. It's a story with immense potential, and I'm eager to see where it goes.