I Became A Black Merchant In Another World

My Thoughts on I Became A Black Merchant In Another World

Alright, let's dive into "I Became A Black Merchant In Another World." This one piqued my interest from the get-go with its promise of medieval business management and a clever protagonist. Reincarnation stories are a guilty pleasure of mine, so I was eager to see what this one offered.

First Impressions

The initial chapters certainly had their charm. The idea of a modern individual using their knowledge to create a cafe with unique desserts in a medieval setting is pretty fun. It sets the stage for a protagonist who's resourceful and innovative. However, that initial spark didn't quite sustain itself for me.

What Works Well

The concept of a "black merchant" in another world is intriguing. The potential for clever schemes, navigating political landscapes, and building a business empire is definitely there. The early focus on introducing modern concepts into a medieval world also held promise, offering a blend of familiar and unfamiliar elements. I can see the appeal for readers who enjoy stories centered around kingdom-building and medieval politics.

Areas of Concern

My biggest issue, and I suspect others might feel the same, is the pacing. The protagonist seems to acquire territory and delve into kingdom-building rather quickly, which feels a bit rushed. It's like the author was too eager to get to the "good stuff" without fully developing the initial premise.

Another point that bothered me was the protagonist's seemingly endless well of knowledge. It felt a little too convenient that he always had the right solution or invention at his fingertips. While some level of knowledge transfer is expected in reincarnation stories, a bit more explanation or grounding would have made it more believable. The lack of depth in the harem aspect was also a letdown, with characters feeling more like accessories than fully fleshed-out individuals.

Final Verdict

"I Became A Black Merchant In Another World" has potential, but it falls short of being a truly exceptional read. The initial premise is engaging, but the rushed pacing and convenient plot devices ultimately hinder its development. If you're looking for a light, easy read with a focus on business management in a fantasy setting, this might be worth a try. However, if you prefer more depth and character development, you might find yourself wanting more.