Be Careful When You Break Off The Engagement. You Have No Claim To The Throne. Because It’s Not Legitimate, Right? Novel Review
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By tsukumo nasu, つくも茄子, 八橋 華
Genres
Browse Library →6 chapters
2022
Description
Alicia, the only daughter of a marquis, has a fiancé. His Highness Julius, the second prince. His Royal Highness has suddenly broken off the engagement. The reason seems to be that he wants to marry his lover. The other party is a woman known for her talent who skipped the Royal University. According to His Highness, she was capable enough to be a princess and support him. Alicia gladly accepts the annulment of the engagement. After all, a royal alliance is supposed to be an honor and an advantage, so why? The enamored second prince does not realize that the betrothal was an alliance made by her grandfather. The second prince and his new fiancée are granted an audience with His Majesty the King. There he learns the truth he never knew. Julius is only the son of a consort. He is a bastard. Of course, he is not entitled to inherit the throne. Moreover, the second prince’s mother comes from a poor viscount family. She cannot possibly become his wife. The Second Prince has lived his life without question. The whole truth will come to light.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- syosetu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
Be Careful When You Break Off The Engagement. You Have No Claim To The Throne. Because It’s Not Legitimate, Right? Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Be Careful When You Break Off The Engagement. You Have No Claim To The Throne. Because It’s Not Legitimate, Right?
First Impressions
Okay, so I dove into this short story expecting some royal drama, and I definitely got it. Be Careful When You Break Off The Engagement... certainly throws you into the deep end with its European-inspired nobility, broken engagements, and a protagonist facing some serious life changes. The premise is intriguing, especially the idea of a prince learning some hard truths about his place in the world.
What Works Well
For a story clocking in at only six chapters, it packs a punch. I appreciated the focus on the female lead, even though the prince's perspective gets a fair amount of screen time. The core of the story, the prince's rude awakening about his illegitimacy and the consequences of his actions, is compelling. The author isn't afraid to let the characters face the music, serving up a dish of justice, even if it's a bit…bitter.
Areas of Concern
Honestly, the world-building feels a bit shaky. The rules surrounding concubines and illegitimate children seem oddly constructed and, at times, contradictory. I found myself questioning the logic behind some of the decisions made by the characters, especially the prince. His naivete borders on unbelievable, and it's hard to fully sympathize with him when he seems so clueless about his own circumstances. The ending, while delivering a "face-slapping" moment, left me feeling a little uneasy. The female lead's reaction to the prince's downfall struck me as unnecessarily vindictive, which didn't quite align with her earlier, more understanding demeanor.
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Final Verdict
Be Careful When You Break Off The Engagement... is a quick read that delivers a dose of royal drama and consequences. While I enjoyed the premise and the swift delivery of justice, the shaky world-building and some questionable character motivations held it back. It's not a bad way to spend an afternoon, but don't expect a deeply nuanced or particularly satisfying story. I'd give it a solid 3 out of 5 stars.
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