After Breaking up With His Fiancée, Who in Favor of His Weak Childhood Friend, She Ended up Marrying His Brother
By touma riko, 当麻リコ
12 chapters
2021
Description
Musker, the fiancé of the Marchioness Amelia, puts his childhood friend in the priority. He proudly tells her that she is frail and he must help her. Amelia is worried about her upcoming wedding. Musker answers his childhood friend’s calls during all the important wedding conversations, including choosing the rings and the dress. Amelia has finally given up on marrying him after seeing him like this. However, when she asks Musker’s father to formally break the engagement, he makes her wait and asks for more time. Musker’s brother Aaron, who had studied abroad for years, returned a month later and assured Amelia, “I swear I will make you happy. Please marry me.” Amelia can only nod her head in perplexity at the confession of Aaron, whom she has long loved but given up on since he had another woman in his life.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- syosetu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
After Breaking up With His Fiancée, Who in Favor of His Weak Childhood Friend, She Ended up Marrying His Brother Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on After Breaking up With His Fiancée, Who in Favor of His Weak Childhood Friend, She Ended up Marrying His Brother
First Impressions
Okay, let's dive into this title – quite a mouthful, isn't it? After Breaking up With His Fiancée, Who in Favor of His Weak Childhood Friend, She Ended up Marrying His Brother promises a classic romance drama with a dash of European nobility, and it mostly delivers, though not without a few stumbles along the way. It feels like a story built on familiar tropes, which can be comforting, but also runs the risk of feeling a bit…bland.
What Works Well
The core of the story is undeniably cute. It's a fluffy romance where misunderstandings, while present, are resolved fairly quickly. I appreciate that the author doesn't drag out the miscommunication trope for too long, allowing the main characters to get together without excessive angst. The "villains" also get their comeuppance, which is always satisfying to see. It definitely scratches that itch for a light, easy read.
Areas of Concern
However, the story does have some flaws. The pacing can feel a bit off, almost like an extended one-shot stretched to twelve chapters. While I enjoyed the quick resolution of conflicts, it also made the overall narrative feel somewhat rushed and lacking in depth. It feels like the problems could have been resolved in a much shorter time frame, making the story feel a bit drawn out. The writing itself also seems to be a point of contention. While I didn't personally find it unreadable, I can see how some readers might struggle with the flow and clarity.
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Final Verdict
Overall, After Breaking up With His Fiancée, Who in Favor of His Weak Childhood Friend, She Ended up Marrying His Brother is a decent, albeit somewhat flawed, time-passer. If you're looking for a quick, fluffy romance with relatively low stakes, this might be right up your alley. However, if you prefer stories with complex characters, intricate plots, and nuanced writing, you might find it a bit lacking. I'd say it's a solid 3 out of 5 stars – enjoyable but not particularly memorable.
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