Things to Do During the Day Novel Review

My Thoughts on Things to Do During the Day

"Things to Do During the Day" is quite the ride, especially if you're coming straight from its prequel, "What to Do at Night." I went in expecting more of the same steamy romance, but I got something… different. And while that wasn't necessarily a bad thing, it definitely took me by surprise.

First Impressions

Initially, I was hooked. The first few chapters pull you right in, and the dynamic between Arsion and Ariel is as charming as ever. I was eager to see how their relationship evolved after marriage and what new sensual explorations they'd embark on. There's a definite allure to seeing a couple so deeply connected navigate their lives together.

What Works Well

The biggest strength of "Things to Do During the Day" lies in its expansion of the world and the characters' backstories. Diving into their celestial past as angels added a layer of intrigue that I didn't expect. I appreciated getting more of Arsion's perspective; it really helped me understand his character on a deeper level. The interactions between the main characters remain cute and funny, and that's a major draw for me. Plus, the ending, with its focus on family, was undeniably heartwarming.

Areas of Concern

However, the shift in tone and plot can be jarring. The introduction of a significant storyline involving angels and cosmic battles felt out of place compared to the simple, intimate nature of the first book. It almost felt like two different stories clumsily stitched together. And while I enjoyed the exploration of their past, I can see how some readers might find the "angel fiasco" unnecessary and detracting from the core appeal of the series. Furthermore, the male lead's behavior, while acceptable in the dark, can be off-putting in the light of day, coming across as sex-obsessed and controlling to some readers. Finally, while the plot expansion was fun, I would have appreciated more focus on the smut scenes.

Final Verdict

Overall, I'd give "Things to Do During the Day" a solid 4 out of 5 stars. It's a fun and engaging read, especially if you're already invested in the characters from "What to Do at Night." Just be prepared for a significant shift in tone and plot. If you're looking for a purely smut-driven sequel, you might be disappointed. But if you're open to a more complex story with elements of fantasy and action, you might just find yourself enjoying this unexpected turn of events.